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Array ( [sid] => 133244 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confusion [time] => 2007-04-03 05:58:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Confusion fill my tired head.
Because of things left unsaid.

I live my days with a broken heart.
That has been shattered and torn apart.

Torn between two men not knowing which way to go.
Unsure of the feelings or how to let them know.

One is in love with me but ifeel for him only as a friend.
The other I am in love with and will be til the very end.

Do I wait for the one I love til he can make up his mind.
Or do I go for the other who loves me and wait to see if some day it is love in him I will find.

The confusion over comes me at all times of the day.
Making my life difficult causing me to loose my way.

Trying to make a decision on which way to turn.
To follow the one I find as a friend or go for the one whos heart I do yearn.

Wish I knew the answer to ease my troubled mind.
To go out and search and maybe someday find.

Til this day may come I sit in my confusion.
My life in turmoil camoflauged by an illusion.

The truth is hidden inside .
And I know it will come out as soon as the confusion can subside. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Loriann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Confusion

Contributed by Loriann on Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 05:58:56 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Confusion fill my tired head.
Because of things left unsaid.

I live my days with a broken heart.
That has been shattered and torn apart.

Torn between two men not knowing which way to go.
Unsure of the feelings or how to let them know.

One is in love with me but ifeel for him only as a friend.
The other I am in love with and will be til the very end.

Do I wait for the one I love til he can make up his mind.
Or do I go for the other who loves me and wait to see if some day it is love in him I will find.

The confusion over comes me at all times of the day.
Making my life difficult causing me to loose my way.

Trying to make a decision on which way to turn.
To follow the one I find as a friend or go for the one whos heart I do yearn.

Wish I knew the answer to ease my troubled mind.
To go out and search and maybe someday find.

Til this day may come I sit in my confusion.
My life in turmoil camoflauged by an illusion.

The truth is hidden inside .
And I know it will come out as soon as the confusion can subside.

Copyright © Loriann ... [ 2007-04-03 05:58:56]
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Re: Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by runawaynameless on Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 01:09:39 PM AEST
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Im sorry for your confusion. I liked what you said though, ive had these problems. But only you will be able to make your choice. Ive very sorry for your confusion. One day it will all come to an end.

Re: Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 04:43:25 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
I can relate in many ways.
huggs,
emy

Re: Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 10:24:43 PM AEST
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It is an emotional poem through which most of us can relate ourselves into, and there is no confusion in that.
Wonderfully penned.

FRANCO.

Re: Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 12:04:27 AM AEST
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I feel for you. I would hope
that you have much sympathy for
the friend who loves you because
he is also waiting for someone to
make up her mind. If this man you
love has even a second of doubt about
choosing you than he does not love you
enough to deserve you however that
also goes for the friend You have doubts
about. I hope you'll consider what I'm
saying. Best of luck to you. You writing
is very honest. I like it. Truly , Doug

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