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Array ( [sid] => 133220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => one last dance [complete] [time] => 2007-04-01 16:36:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => one last dance..

there's nothing like your kiss
the bitter softness of your lips

a feeling ive never felt
like an amazing hand i've been dealt

up late thinking of my crime
only in my thoughts i confine

you say my love is fake
what about these nights lying awake?

easy? try and tell me how
if only you could see me now

night after night i write
all for one light

where are you now?
are you happy?
does he make you feel the way i did?

does it hurt?


im in pain
with nothing left to gain

feeling your essence when your near
nothing i wouldn't give to have you here

its been a while i know
***** cupid, and his stupid bow

uve been the only girl i trust
i promise what we had wasnt just lust

your heart beating beneath my skin
a kiss i lay apon your chin

i need to stop missing you
before this knife goes through

give me a chance
may i have one last dance?


[comments] => 3 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 22 [informant] => navnaf [notes] => Duplicate or multiple posts of the same poem are not allowed. Please, next time have the original removed first before posting it again. Or you can have the original edited. See site FAQ on how to edit / delete poems. Thank you. Moderator_18 June 23, 2012 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
one last dance [complete]

Contributed by navnaf on Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 04:36:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



one last dance..

there's nothing like your kiss
the bitter softness of your lips

a feeling ive never felt
like an amazing hand i've been dealt

up late thinking of my crime
only in my thoughts i confine

you say my love is fake
what about these nights lying awake?

easy? try and tell me how
if only you could see me now

night after night i write
all for one light

where are you now?
are you happy?
does he make you feel the way i did?

does it hurt?


im in pain
with nothing left to gain

feeling your essence when your near
nothing i wouldn't give to have you here

its been a while i know
***** cupid, and his stupid bow

uve been the only girl i trust
i promise what we had wasnt just lust

your heart beating beneath my skin
a kiss i lay apon your chin

i need to stop missing you
before this knife goes through

give me a chance
may i have one last dance?






Copyright © navnaf ... [ 2007-04-01 16:36:50]
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Re: one last dance [complete] (User Rating: 1 )
by Soccerflyer27 on Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 05:04:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Very touching and meaningful. Great write!


Re: one last dance [complete] (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:37:30 PM AEST
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i feel this way as well....it hurts so much...i can only hope the pain will soon diminish...great write

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: one last dance [complete] (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 11:08:54 AM AEST
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great imagery mixed with longing, a beautiful write,

hugs n' love nessa




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