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One

night amidst

my pondering at

the evening sky above,

upon a haze my eyes would

gaze into the face of

love.

So

beautiful

you were to me

in all your radiant glow,

the thought of you would

make an angel wanna

love you

so.

But

not an angel

could i be deservingly

of you, and yet upon this earth

with me we shared a love so

true.

The

star that came

to love me from another

galaxy, perhaps was thinking

of me just as much as i of

thee.

Now

no longer need i ponder

at that haze so bright, since the star

that came to love me glows beside me every

night.

Ben

A pleasant week end to all.

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The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 08:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

One

night amidst

my pondering at

the evening sky above,

upon a haze my eyes would

gaze into the face of

love.

So

beautiful

you were to me

in all your radiant glow,

the thought of you would

make an angel wanna

love you

so.

But

not an angel

could i be deservingly

of you, and yet upon this earth

with me we shared a love so

true.

The

star that came

to love me from another

galaxy, perhaps was thinking

of me just as much as i of

thee.

Now

no longer need i ponder

at that haze so bright, since the star

that came to love me glows beside me every

night.

Ben

A pleasant week end to all.

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2007-03-30 20:38:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 09:25:00 PM AEST
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Wow, this is very romantic, my friend.
Simply beautifull. Say hi to the misses for me and you two have the best weekend ever.
huggs, big smiles,
emy

Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 09:04:38 AM AEST
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Yes, this is just so romantic and beautiful.
I love the last stanza and am very happy that you have found such a person to share your life with.

Take care,
Dom

Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 10:33:55 AM AEST
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Well no need to ask what would love do for this...Spectacular flight just taken off. Well done and those stars in your eyes are kinda blinding....lol Excellent

Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 04:42:02 PM AEST
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Ben~
Romantically beautiful, inspiring and so uplifting. You are the envy of many for a love like yours is so hard to find my dear friend.
Your beautiful poetry warms the heart~
A most gorgeous woven tapestery of love. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
much love to you & your lovely wife.
As always your fan/friend,
sue m

Re: The Star That Came To Love Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 02:31:05 PM AEST
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how beautiful to liken her to a star, your a bottomless well of sweetness, you are:)

love n' hugs nessa

roses

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