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[title] => The Light of Night
[time] => 2007-03-30 08:58:26
[hometext] => I can dream can't I?
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The violins of peace played loud on earth.
The wisdom of their power and their worth.
Let men take flight to care and nourish all.
The hate from hearts now took its mighty fall.
The chorus of a thousand angels rang.
No bombs or shots in silent space did hang.
The peaceful look of faces staring there,
Heart opened with an entity of care.
Light of brilliant blues and gold’s unfold.
Pains now washed from souls no longer told.
Loves embrace turned money into feed.
Removed enticement values of the greed.
A dream with all mankind involved.
I entered into worlds that oh too soon dissolved.
My dreams to come another day forecast,
That here on earth the holy dreams should last.
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The Light of Night
Contributed by
needledancing
on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 08:58:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The violins of peace played loud on earth.
The wisdom of their power and their worth.
Let men take flight to care and nourish all.
The hate from hearts now took its mighty fall.
The chorus of a thousand angels rang.
No bombs or shots in silent space did hang.
The peaceful look of faces staring there,
Heart opened with an entity of care.
Light of brilliant blues and gold’s unfold.
Pains now washed from souls no longer told.
Loves embrace turned money into feed.
Removed enticement values of the greed.
A dream with all mankind involved.
I entered into worlds that oh too soon dissolved.
My dreams to come another day forecast,
That here on earth the holy dreams should last.
Copyright ©
needledancing
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2007-03-30 08:58:26]
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Re: The Light of Night
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by DrowningHeart on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 10:58:50 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one, what a great post.
Blessed be, D |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 12:01:33 PM AEST
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Oh, ND .. this is precious. Truly precious. It has such a beautiful feel to it,
but also a sadness that is overwhelming!!
Dream on, dear poet. Nothing can ever be accomplished, without
dreaming it first. And this is a beautiful and admirable dream indeed!
Loverly .. just loverly ~
~Breezy |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 12:59:49 PM AEST
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This is song is reminiscent of the Rapture in Christian mythologies. However you secularized and inter-faith version with elegance. May this and all good things come to pass.
Bravo
Yang |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 01:07:38 PM AEST
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If we did not...could not dream, I cannot imagine living.
This is a beautiful piece of poetry. I reread that second stanza several times. I loved it.
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 02:05:04 PM AEST
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Sometimes poetry captivates and entrances us from the first letter to the last.
This had that effect on me, I was drawn in by the way you weaved your words together.
Great work
Steve |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 02:31:03 PM AEST
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| beautifully dreaming, with beautiful intensions, great piece |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 08:10:57 PM AEST
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| This is certainly a pleasant read. Very beautiful. |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 09:42:44 PM AEST
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My dear friend,
This is the most beatifuull thing I've read in 4 ever. I'll dream with you friend as luv will make up the difference and sooner or later people are touched and changed.
We have to keep the faith, God does the rest.
You should really be proud of this masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 11:13:14 PM AEST
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This is one fantastic dream that i wish and hope;
"That here on earth the holy dreams should last."
it a great poem of vision. and beautifully penned.
FRANCO.
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Re: The Light of Night
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 01:30:22 AM AEST
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I have always thought that the light in any darkness, is our ability and inclination to dream. The brighter the dream... the less bleak the night and the more adamant the dreamer, the more likely the dream will exist beyond the dawn.
Dream on, ND.
Seeing the light,
~Snemmy |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 31st March 2007 @ 11:36:58 AM AEST
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I gotta say, you write such beautiful poetry, love your style and flow and positive vibes.
this was a sweet peice of work. dreams, i guess they come and go and if were lucky sometimes stay awhile. beautiful work you've
pened here as always, enjoyable to read and behold.
Ben |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 11:15:25 AM AEST
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I`ve read several poems, your very gifted.
this is a fav" i`ve come across. Its wonderful how styles vari. Vincent |
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Re: The Light of Night
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 02:00:45 PM AEST
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beautifully written!
love n' hugs nessa |
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