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Array ( [sid] => 133109 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain And Seduction [time] => 2007-03-28 01:32:13 [hometext] => By: Tony Shaneyfelt [bodytext] => Two dark sights on one face see
The first one be the seducer of me
All desire, and never control
Within this soul, another patrols
After seduction, soon follows pain
Displaying the rain to induce the insane
Both equal and opposite, can only suggest
Within this chest, lives one of the best
Seduction and pain in one mind see
Hand in hand be the deciever of thee
Foolish, you think my mind is my own
It's very well known I live, not alone
No feeling inside, no sound for my voice
My mouth never moist, no freedom of choice
Invented illusions controlled by strings
All of these things, "perfection" he sings
My creator, controller, holder of hearts
In this art, he plays all of these parts
Seduction and pain I do not see
Accept that it be black puppetry. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 13 [informant] => lifeslittleangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Pain And Seduction

Contributed by lifeslittleangel on Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 01:32:13 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Two dark sights on one face see
The first one be the seducer of me
All desire, and never control
Within this soul, another patrols
After seduction, soon follows pain
Displaying the rain to induce the insane
Both equal and opposite, can only suggest
Within this chest, lives one of the best
Seduction and pain in one mind see
Hand in hand be the deciever of thee
Foolish, you think my mind is my own
It's very well known I live, not alone
No feeling inside, no sound for my voice
My mouth never moist, no freedom of choice
Invented illusions controlled by strings
All of these things, "perfection" he sings
My creator, controller, holder of hearts
In this art, he plays all of these parts
Seduction and pain I do not see
Accept that it be black puppetry.

Copyright © lifeslittleangel ... [ 2007-03-28 01:32:13]
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Re: Pain And Seduction (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 07:09:44 AM AEST
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This was amazing. I loved this. The rhyming was excellent through the whole poem and I think you did an excellent job expressing your thoughts and feelings in this. Amazing job.

Take care
Christina

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