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The overcast and saddened sky has nothing new to say.
Many things I’ve to finish, start or take apart.
I take an inventory of the quality of heart.

I’ve wakened to my life in more majestic mood.
Lost visions from a canvass, lost taste for nourished food.
Felt journeys never taken and words unsung within.
Stretched paper money cross my life until transparent thin.

The envied lives I seek today are on the forest floors.
Seeking their survival trained life force carnivores.
The simple transactions of life verses death.
The bloodied face of sacrifices panting from their breath.

Hungered by the thirst for life I’d gladly join them there.
The jungle life I live among heartless and unfair.
Sunlight of hope busting through the forest of survivals.
Awakens all the knowledge of the values and arrivals.

Until another daybreak when peace is packed within.
I’ll take a warriors stance and justify my sin.
Burned cities of hate are all we’ve created.
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Beastie Feelings

Contributed by needledancing on Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 07:26:29 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Its early morning and I look toward my day.
The overcast and saddened sky has nothing new to say.
Many things I’ve to finish, start or take apart.
I take an inventory of the quality of heart.

I’ve wakened to my life in more majestic mood.
Lost visions from a canvass, lost taste for nourished food.
Felt journeys never taken and words unsung within.
Stretched paper money cross my life until transparent thin.

The envied lives I seek today are on the forest floors.
Seeking their survival trained life force carnivores.
The simple transactions of life verses death.
The bloodied face of sacrifices panting from their breath.

Hungered by the thirst for life I’d gladly join them there.
The jungle life I live among heartless and unfair.
Sunlight of hope busting through the forest of survivals.
Awakens all the knowledge of the values and arrivals.

Until another daybreak when peace is packed within.
I’ll take a warriors stance and justify my sin.
Burned cities of hate are all we’ve created.
Our planetary ignorance forever debated.

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Re: Beastie Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 08:00:14 AM AEST
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This poem captivated me with its spectacular sentiment. I have felt this way before and it is a very strong emotion which you managed to capture perfectly. Lovely; this filled me with a longing for a different sort of life.

Dom

Re: Beastie Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 05:01:06 PM AEST
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Stretched paper money cross my life until transparent thin.

My favorite line, I can so relate.
good capture here.
Big huggs,
emy

Re: Beastie Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 07:47:53 PM AEST
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I fully agree with you my friend;
"The envied lives I seek today are on the forest floors."
though we do live in a jungle of a deferent kind, where tactics of survival is more complicated.

wonderful presentation of emotion.

FRANCO.

Re: Beastie Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 02:14:31 AM AEST
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It's comforting to discover this kindred mood to one of my own, that usually, I feel very alone in...

And, of course, I'd have never known this comfort, had you not the skills it took to express this. Excellent!

BigLoveMuchPeace
~me

Re: Beastie Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 01:47:27 PM AEST
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There is a ferocity within seeking to emerge and stay true to its nature. However a deep inner hum keeps me sane a compassion for all things animate and inanimate replaces such truculence and unfurls waves and rings of peace that envelop the earth.
I read these 'Beastie Feelings" loud and clear it is where we came from but hopefully not where we end up.

Bravo

Peace
Yang

Re: Beastie Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 30th March 2007 @ 02:08:04 PM AEST
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Well your moods certainly take you on a journey and you have expressed those moods with such eloquence.
May you have many more

Steve

Re: Beastie Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:56:52 PM AEST
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Your style and just your writting itself is quite fascinating, hold's my interest in a compelling way. easy to get lost in and very revealing. Another beauty.

Ben

Re: Beastie Feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 09:16:17 AM AEST
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exquiste, the favorite of yours ive thus read.........

love n' hugs nessa

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