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[sid] => 133074
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Fly Off the Roof ( Never Fly)
[time] => 2007-03-26 09:58:34
[hometext] => A change in type of poem for me review please.
[bodytext] => I sit up high, And look at the sky, As the sun sets on the horizon. Over the garage on the shingles, I sit and watch the world go by. I spread the wings, this place of mine brings, And dream of the birds, Flying so high. Up here is quiet, Away from the riots, On the news and in my home. Up here I can be alone. I stand on the edge, And take my pledge, As my emotions overtake me. I spread the wings, this haven brings, and quickly fall, Losing it all. They say keep away, and so everyday, I go by just to dream again. Oh, how I cry, As my dreams die, When I look up high, And realize I'll never fly. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 52 [informant] => flamingblade [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
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