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Array ( [sid] => 133054 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reality decays [time] => 2007-03-25 16:13:33 [hometext] => realtiy is a dream [bodytext] => I had never known a true thought outside of my own head
I breathe the salient cries of the lone rowboat drifting of in solitude towards blackened waves

I am the greatest illusionist
My prestige being the greatest act
I present everything’s existent nonexistence
I feel the fraudulent innocence in the rose’s burn tearing into already rotting flesh
Remnants of life dangling from knurly jaws

The rain intoxicates and incarcerates all
And I am called cumulus because I so chose
Autumn, the leaves fall and turn colors
I paint them with my unaccompanied eyes

Bile swirls with the nourishment
He never could consume solids
I taste petulant vomit
Always sinking lower
Waking up intertwined with smell of decaying fruit
I magnify the decaying love and trace the lost lines

I know his eyes are frigid and dense
His heart palpitates, a result of routine, not humanity
Everything is logical he says
So I interchange my arms and legs
And float nebulously across the ceiling

Ignorance is bliss, a wise man once said I say if this is honesty; I’d rather fabricate
In this day where one could sell someone their own soul create the right advertisement, 9.95 plus shipping
You will never figure out where

I create my own billboard
I stretch my being across the sky, I combust
I wonder if life insurance should cover arrogance
Perhaps Just apathy; in a nice neat take home box

The slits that make up for his eyes haunt
He cries and they secrete nothing but sand
I find myself again at the waters
I am stolen away with the passion of the petals
They fell on my cheek that fall

Innocence and beauty in the back pocket of a stranger
I seek nature’s romance else where; I find myself alone
Shamelessly, Fearlessly, Painfully, I lay on a bed of dull knives; barely enough to draw blood
The callous empty womb in which the world was nurtured is maliciously patient and still
A rattle snake with venom, she will strike again


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Reality decays

Contributed by eyesxmurder on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 04:13:33 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal



I had never known a true thought outside of my own head
I breathe the salient cries of the lone rowboat drifting of in solitude towards blackened waves

I am the greatest illusionist
My prestige being the greatest act
I present everything’s existent nonexistence
I feel the fraudulent innocence in the rose’s burn tearing into already rotting flesh
Remnants of life dangling from knurly jaws

The rain intoxicates and incarcerates all
And I am called cumulus because I so chose
Autumn, the leaves fall and turn colors
I paint them with my unaccompanied eyes

Bile swirls with the nourishment
He never could consume solids
I taste petulant vomit
Always sinking lower
Waking up intertwined with smell of decaying fruit
I magnify the decaying love and trace the lost lines

I know his eyes are frigid and dense
His heart palpitates, a result of routine, not humanity
Everything is logical he says
So I interchange my arms and legs
And float nebulously across the ceiling

Ignorance is bliss, a wise man once said I say if this is honesty; I’d rather fabricate
In this day where one could sell someone their own soul create the right advertisement, 9.95 plus shipping
You will never figure out where

I create my own billboard
I stretch my being across the sky, I combust
I wonder if life insurance should cover arrogance
Perhaps Just apathy; in a nice neat take home box

The slits that make up for his eyes haunt
He cries and they secrete nothing but sand
I find myself again at the waters
I am stolen away with the passion of the petals
They fell on my cheek that fall

Innocence and beauty in the back pocket of a stranger
I seek nature’s romance else where; I find myself alone
Shamelessly, Fearlessly, Painfully, I lay on a bed of dull knives; barely enough to draw blood
The callous empty womb in which the world was nurtured is maliciously patient and still
A rattle snake with venom, she will strike again






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Re: Reality decays (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 08:07:42 PM AEST
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This is very creative and very well written. You should write a novel. Nice job.


Re: Reality decays (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 10:27:24 PM AEST
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This is so good


Re: Reality decays (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 12:39:13 AM AEST
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Everything is logical he says
So I interchange my arms and legs
And float nebulously across the ceiling

These words cracked me up. I could just see you floating accross the ceiling. And imaging what he said after that.
Very deep, creative writing.
huggs,smiles,
emy




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