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Array ( [sid] => 133037 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another tomorrow [time] => 2007-03-25 03:54:51 [hometext] => very deep feelings on cold words said to undeserving people!! [bodytext] => Why do people continue to hurt?

Why is life so damned to beauty?

Is it such an offense to feel pointless and abject,
to preceive no one wants you?

A crime?.........to endure what everyone in the world must feel,to be beaten down with insensative and remorseful
words?

Dreams of being accepted, so why not accept them?

I demand again, why do people continue to suffer?

Is it just to test your might of self worth?

Laughter, is so powerful of an expression.

Why can't people just forget the amusement of making others feel worthless?
and instead supply their hearts with tears of indulgence and pleasure.

Someone must know how it feels to be relentlessly sacrificed
to the abandonment of bliss,until your head convulses with saturated sobs and sorrow.

So, care enough to sever that wall,
that countless others tried for so many years to
preserve.

And vanish the coldness behind,
for another, tomorrow. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 65 [informant] => exstacyk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
Another tomorrow

Contributed by exstacyk on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 03:54:51 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



Why do people continue to hurt?

Why is life so damned to beauty?

Is it such an offense to feel pointless and abject,
to preceive no one wants you?

A crime?.........to endure what everyone in the world must feel,to be beaten down with insensative and remorseful
words?

Dreams of being accepted, so why not accept them?

I demand again, why do people continue to suffer?

Is it just to test your might of self worth?

Laughter, is so powerful of an expression.

Why can't people just forget the amusement of making others feel worthless?
and instead supply their hearts with tears of indulgence and pleasure.

Someone must know how it feels to be relentlessly sacrificed
to the abandonment of bliss,until your head convulses with saturated sobs and sorrow.

So, care enough to sever that wall,
that countless others tried for so many years to
preserve.

And vanish the coldness behind,
for another, tomorrow.




Copyright © exstacyk ... [ 2007-03-25 03:54:51]
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Re: Another tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 07:20:08 AM AEST
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Wonderful words...I am very sensitive when I see people in needless pain so this wraps around my heart.Thank you


Re: Another tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 09:58:57 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. Excellent job.




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