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Array ( [sid] => 133025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dead Serenity [time] => 2007-03-24 19:37:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In the hollow hearts of men
Lay the disparity of diamonds ten
Shine and shimmer unto the world
Glisten in the night in the darkness lured
Liable dignities give Woe! To the preacher
Who designates the truth, and lie and devours the creature
Shall the day ever arrive, that truth live it’s meaning
Shall the sun ever shine, without its heart bleeding?
And to the winds and to the gaze
Of which one hopes to ever lie
Given to the fantasy of the soul
Give in to the momentary of its core
Adore not the hope that betrays
Ignore not the smile that causes gay
Foe yet friend, friend yet foe
Disguised in life the wind will blow
Sway oh mortal to its dancing feet
Give not unto the happy defeat
Where have all the silenced lambs gone
Where have all the dignities born
For if shall a mortal rule this earth
He shall be deprived and strangled into dust
And he who conquers, must conquer fear
Shift the disaster to other gears
Vanish all the murderous years
Destroy subtle saltiness from tears
Hubris colors of hope may come
But, laugh they too at our fickle some
Though death shall come, it will be soon
Dancing to its deadly rhythm, dancing to monotonous tunes
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Dead Serenity

Contributed by xvaria on Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 07:37:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



In the hollow hearts of men
Lay the disparity of diamonds ten
Shine and shimmer unto the world
Glisten in the night in the darkness lured
Liable dignities give Woe! To the preacher
Who designates the truth, and lie and devours the creature
Shall the day ever arrive, that truth live it’s meaning
Shall the sun ever shine, without its heart bleeding?
And to the winds and to the gaze
Of which one hopes to ever lie
Given to the fantasy of the soul
Give in to the momentary of its core
Adore not the hope that betrays
Ignore not the smile that causes gay
Foe yet friend, friend yet foe
Disguised in life the wind will blow
Sway oh mortal to its dancing feet
Give not unto the happy defeat
Where have all the silenced lambs gone
Where have all the dignities born
For if shall a mortal rule this earth
He shall be deprived and strangled into dust
And he who conquers, must conquer fear
Shift the disaster to other gears
Vanish all the murderous years
Destroy subtle saltiness from tears
Hubris colors of hope may come
But, laugh they too at our fickle some
Though death shall come, it will be soon
Dancing to its deadly rhythm, dancing to monotonous tunes




Copyright © xvaria ... [ 2007-03-24 19:37:57]
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Re: Dead Serenity (User Rating: 1 )
by ferasdour on Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 08:00:53 PM AEST
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wait, so..... there are good times ahead? is that what is to be found in all of this? for if man shall dance the devil's dance, is it not for his fondness for the deeds he has done?



by the by,
mortals only can control the world known to other mortals, and nothing more.
by and by.







mann i'm easily amused! but does that not mean it's harder to become bored?


Re: Dead Serenity (User Rating: 1 )
by Xvaria on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 08:03:03 AM AEST
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I would really appreciate if my my poem was understood before it's critisized or interpreted. This poem gives superiority to our fate .... rather then how we try to change it....

ENJOY




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