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[title] => ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
[time] => 2007-03-23 19:48:33
[hometext] => In memory of Mohawk...
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Couch surfin' & soul searchin'~
pass into yesterday
As pretending not to be lost~
we some how found our way...
Swimming against the tide~
in search of our own flow
Holding on for dear life~
we let each other go...
Far from those by abandoned~
we had both run away
In turn rejecting acceptance~
we met as kindred strays...
Joined for a time that stood still~
allowing us to grow
Beyond who never we were~
into such selves as we could know...
Changing our silent screams~
into something to say
And us in each others arms~
from who first in them lay...
Attempting to get higher~
than ever were brought low
Furthering the shine of eyes~
which knew not of their own glow...
While within one another~
we could from all else hide
Even the ghosts which haunted~
what beneath our fears lied...
We slept in a dry creek bed~
blanketed by the stars
And experienced a peace~
if not whole, at least ours...
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~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
Contributed by
misfitme
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Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 07:48:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Couch surfin' & soul searchin'~
pass into yesterday
As pretending not to be lost~
we some how found our way...
Swimming against the tide~
in search of our own flow
Holding on for dear life~
we let each other go...
Far from those by abandoned~
we had both run away
In turn rejecting acceptance~
we met as kindred strays...
Joined for a time that stood still~
allowing us to grow
Beyond who never we were~
into such selves as we could know...
Changing our silent screams~
into something to say
And us in each others arms~
from who first in them lay...
Attempting to get higher~
than ever were brought low
Furthering the shine of eyes~
which knew not of their own glow...
While within one another~
we could from all else hide
Even the ghosts which haunted~
what beneath our fears lied...
We slept in a dry creek bed~
blanketed by the stars
And experienced a peace~
if not whole, at least ours...
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misfitme
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2007-03-23 19:48:33]
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by artjunkiekyle on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 08:21:52 PM AEST
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this evokes so many emotions, all of which are hard to explain. this is truly beauiful and heartfelt. thanks for posting.
-kyle |
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 08:25:50 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
I especiall;y like your title.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by needledancing on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:34:44 PM AEST
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| This is a fantastic write of someone who is truly wise about a relationship...healthy and aware that you take and give the best of each other and in the end remember those wonderful parts of each other you gave and learned from..bless you for this write. I hope many here read it. |
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:40:30 PM AEST
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wonderful style of writing, simple yet smooth flowing words. particularly;
"While within one another~
we could from all else hide
Even the ghosts which haunted~
what beneath our fears lied..."
GREAT INDEED.
FRANCO. |
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 05:05:12 PM AEST
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What an exceptional ode to someone who clearly marked your life to an inspirational degree. I love the journey this took me on, and the people from my own past it reminded me of... I enjoyed this write immensely!
~Scorp. |
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 10:59:00 PM AEST
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Oh, my dear poetsis .. this is an incredible depth inspired write.
I, too, was reminded of my very own past and the
influences that led me to where I am today.
I more than loved this line..
Beyond who we never were~
Holy wow. There is an intentional meaning in that line that
speaks to me. It brings a nostalgic calm, but also a question
into my heart. Wonderfully emotive, hun.
stirring ~
~Breezy |
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 11:08:49 PM AEST
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It is not enough to Know. We need to apply what we know, to realize the meaning of our personal truth in joyful action with cosmic laws which are the invisible roots of our actions, our development and creation of life. We can ignore them, but we can also occasionally refer to them to correct our thinking or feeling:
"...As pretending not to be lost~
we some how found our way..."
Whole generations can learn from this one line.
Bravo
AJ |
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 26th March 2007 @ 12:07:57 AM AEST
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You sneaky thing you, you posted this one as I left yesterday didn't you, lol.
I gotta hand it to ya my sweet moon maiden this write of yours evokes alot of emotions within me my dear friend.
A heartfelt, emotive and very well penned piece of poetry. Tip of the hat to ya hun
*inspiring poetic smiles*
as always ur fan/friend,
dreamer~ |
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 07:43:58 AM AEST
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This is a beauty, a treasure to be hold to be sure. I simply read it and read it and got lost in it. I would have cut and pasted some of your lines like i do in the comment but as i read it i was just swepted away and left breathless, by the whole poem. Tottaly overwhelming you are. Such a unique style, and such a gifted writter. Lovely work Kerry, always a treat to delve into your poetry my friend.
Ben |
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Re: ~Couch Surfin' & Soul Searchin'~
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 03:55:52 PM AEST
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~:*beautiful*:~
love n' hugs nessa |
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