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Array ( [sid] => 132990 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tears Of Black. [time] => 2007-03-23 16:54:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Words that burn to the third degree
Boiling through the flesh
Like the love that bleeds from me
Put both of your hands inside my mouth
Reach down and feel my destiny
It's no longer what I thought it would be
You in my future is something I can no longer see
Blue eyes that cry tears of black
Broken daggers resting in my back
A heart turned cold, veins of ice restrict
A living dead girl, victim of the pain you inflict
No ashes to ashes, no dust to dust
No more faith, no more trust
Just a broken soul with broken wings
A broken voice that no longer sings
No more love, nothing left to give
No glimmer of hope, no reason to live
I'm out of emotions, I have nothing left to feel
Just painful memories and wounds that won't heal
They say sticks and stones will break my bones
And that's definately true
But that's nothing compared to what you put me through
Something my soul couldn't survive
You took every part of me for granted
And crucified me for simply being alive
And I loved you so much that I continually tried
I tried to make you love me
But every attempt was another part of me that died
And I watched my faith slowly drown
In the ocean of tears that I cried
You were my love, my best friend
The one who promised to be with me until the end
The one I adored and would always defend
But the truth is you lied about it all
You built me up just to watch me fall
You never cared about me, I never really mattered
I watched you party with your friends while my entire life shattered
But it's ok, I guess thats the type of person you really are
And I promise to keep your face embedded in each and every scar
As a reminder to this lesson I have learned
To never trust again cuz I'll just end up gettin burned
Now heres where the story ends, it's time for me to go
I'm on a journey to get lost and never be found
And I place my faith in the belief that what comes around goes around
I'm just beaten inside, I no longer care to try
And the only thing I have left to say to you is...
Goodbye. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Tears Of Black.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 04:54:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Words that burn to the third degree
Boiling through the flesh
Like the love that bleeds from me
Put both of your hands inside my mouth
Reach down and feel my destiny
It's no longer what I thought it would be
You in my future is something I can no longer see
Blue eyes that cry tears of black
Broken daggers resting in my back
A heart turned cold, veins of ice restrict
A living dead girl, victim of the pain you inflict
No ashes to ashes, no dust to dust
No more faith, no more trust
Just a broken soul with broken wings
A broken voice that no longer sings
No more love, nothing left to give
No glimmer of hope, no reason to live
I'm out of emotions, I have nothing left to feel
Just painful memories and wounds that won't heal
They say sticks and stones will break my bones
And that's definately true
But that's nothing compared to what you put me through
Something my soul couldn't survive
You took every part of me for granted
And crucified me for simply being alive
And I loved you so much that I continually tried
I tried to make you love me
But every attempt was another part of me that died
And I watched my faith slowly drown
In the ocean of tears that I cried
You were my love, my best friend
The one who promised to be with me until the end
The one I adored and would always defend
But the truth is you lied about it all
You built me up just to watch me fall
You never cared about me, I never really mattered
I watched you party with your friends while my entire life shattered
But it's ok, I guess thats the type of person you really are
And I promise to keep your face embedded in each and every scar
As a reminder to this lesson I have learned
To never trust again cuz I'll just end up gettin burned
Now heres where the story ends, it's time for me to go
I'm on a journey to get lost and never be found
And I place my faith in the belief that what comes around goes around
I'm just beaten inside, I no longer care to try
And the only thing I have left to say to you is...
Goodbye.




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Re: Tears Of Black. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 11:23:27 PM AEST
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teary eyed* Wow...this is an excellent piece...word for word it is honest and pure...it is exactly how I've been feeling since my break up...thx for sharing. I too take comfort in knowing that karma will one day pay him a visit.




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