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Array ( [sid] => 132950 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I see your pain [time] => 2007-03-22 03:53:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You think that your alone,
But I see you there,
I am always with you,
I have made it clear.

But you think your alone,
You sit and wonder why,
You want to end it all,
You think it all the time.

Do you know that I see you,
I see those tears flow,
Did you ask me to help you,
Oh, I love you so.

Don't hurt yourself any longer,
Wipe away those tears,
Smile again my child,
Know that I am here.

Many things are around you,
There are things you can not see,
Look to me my child,
I can set you free.

I'm the rock that you can lean on,
I can get you through the day,
Just lean on me my child,
I can show you the way.

There are many things all around you,
Please look to me today,
Lay your burdens down,
I will carry them all away.

I'm the only one,
There is no one else around,
Just look to me my child,
I will put you on solid ground.
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I see your pain

Contributed by sandypoet on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 03:53:25 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

You think that your alone,
But I see you there,
I am always with you,
I have made it clear.

But you think your alone,
You sit and wonder why,
You want to end it all,
You think it all the time.

Do you know that I see you,
I see those tears flow,
Did you ask me to help you,
Oh, I love you so.

Don't hurt yourself any longer,
Wipe away those tears,
Smile again my child,
Know that I am here.

Many things are around you,
There are things you can not see,
Look to me my child,
I can set you free.

I'm the rock that you can lean on,
I can get you through the day,
Just lean on me my child,
I can show you the way.

There are many things all around you,
Please look to me today,
Lay your burdens down,
I will carry them all away.

I'm the only one,
There is no one else around,
Just look to me my child,
I will put you on solid ground.

Copyright © sandypoet ... [ 2007-03-22 03:53:25]
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Re: I see your pain (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 04:08:15 AM AEST
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An incredible write.
good job.
huggs,
emy

Re: I see your pain (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 05:42:39 AM AEST
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You write this with such passion and heart. The feeling of hopelessness truly can be truned around if one would just seek him. May you continue to fill your heart with peace and joy each and everyday.

sadaddy

Re: I see your pain (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 01:47:46 PM AEST
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This is sooo good and a fantastic way of letting someone know you truly care & are there for them....good job!!

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