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Well I love you but the feeling's not the same. Nothing ever went according to my plan. By now we should be together, kissing, holding hands.

Maybe someday I can win, but the future doesn't look to bright. Sometimes it just makes me wish that my life had a light.

Sometimes I go crazy and I say it is enough, but I can't stop loving you, no matter if times are rough. Well I would be there for you whenever you are in need. What must I do to show you that I would'nt let your heart grow weeds. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 2 [informant] => nirvana12 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Thinking Out Loud

Contributed by nirvana12 on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 08:10:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

While I think about it, I think I'll think out loud. I was speaking to your heart but it suddenly turned deaf. Thinking about love with tears in my eyes, can't I just go back a bit so that I could try.

Well I love you but the feeling's not the same. Nothing ever went according to my plan. By now we should be together, kissing, holding hands.

Maybe someday I can win, but the future doesn't look to bright. Sometimes it just makes me wish that my life had a light.

Sometimes I go crazy and I say it is enough, but I can't stop loving you, no matter if times are rough. Well I would be there for you whenever you are in need. What must I do to show you that I would'nt let your heart grow weeds.

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Re: Thinking Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 08:39:57 PM AEST
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It is a wonderful reflection of the mood.

great.

FRANCO.

Re: Thinking Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 02:22:58 PM AEST
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A strong flow of feelings alongside of 'Thinking Out Loud.' Keep writing as the review of what is penned will teach you over and over again.

Good Job

Peace
Yang

Re: Thinking Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by itsnotme on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 05:18:03 PM AEST
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thanks for the write made a me remember

seems like a circle i know to well,until you break the spell,
the light will come shinning i know this to well

Re: Thinking Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 07:27:38 PM AEST
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great dedication,
If she could see your heart
She would know she has nothing to fear.
Good write,
I too wish I didn't feel so much

God bless you
It will all work.
one day

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