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[sid] => 132918
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Mr. Potterer
[time] => 2007-03-21 07:01:24
[hometext] => This poem is NOT true: About an young orphan girl who meets a potter
[bodytext] => I passed by a potter once His pottery reminded me much of my mother Not that I would ever forget her, you see She was breaht-takingly beautiful, Yet ever so fragile Her pictiure slept with me every night, As did the stained glass windows Of the church above my head "Where is your mother, little one?" The potter had asked "She lives up in Heaven," I pointed To the sky The man looked at me sadly, but I smiled "It's okay, she's with daddy." I added The potter nodded. "I bet she's very happy to see you grow so strong." I frowned because I was not strong. Jack always won when we played Tug-Of-War The man finished and packed his things "This is for you." He'd said and gave me One of his pretty pots "Oh, it's beautiful. Thank you." "You're welcome... Well, see you then" "Yes. Goodbye Mr. Potterer." I'd said COPYRIGHT 2007 THORN@YPDC Author's Note: I can't get the layout right. No matter where I break the lines or start a new stanza, it just doesn't seem to come together right. Any suggestions? This is my first visit back here since 2005. I haven't written poetry since! It's good to be back, though :D [comments] => 0 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 5 [informant] => thorn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChildrensPoetry )
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