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Array ( [sid] => 132911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To gaze into your eyes [time] => 2007-03-20 20:26:00 [hometext] => What can I say: I am dead & she is alive [bodytext] => I can see
I can see
I'm dying to be alive
I can see
I can see
Your face inside my mind
I can see
I can see
I'm dying to try

I'm willing the brush the trees aside
Turn up the volume, draw the blinds
Light the candles to bring the flame to the night

I'm willing to open the door wide
Prepare your dinner with pride
Just so I can gaze into your eyes

I want to be alive

Feel hope and love grow inside

Believe in you and I

When I sleep
when I'm awake
When you keep
When you're away

I want to believe

Hope and feel your love inside of me

Growing me alive

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To gaze into your eyes

Contributed by rhei76 on Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 08:26:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I can see
I can see
I'm dying to be alive
I can see
I can see
Your face inside my mind
I can see
I can see
I'm dying to try

I'm willing the brush the trees aside
Turn up the volume, draw the blinds
Light the candles to bring the flame to the night

I'm willing to open the door wide
Prepare your dinner with pride
Just so I can gaze into your eyes

I want to be alive

Feel hope and love grow inside

Believe in you and I

When I sleep
when I'm awake
When you keep
When you're away

I want to believe

Hope and feel your love inside of me

Growing me alive

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2007-03-20 20:26:00]
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Re: To gaze into your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 08:11:44 PM AEST
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this poem is really deep and I can feel the emotion in every line of this poem. I have3 often felt this way myself. This was an AWESOME poem!

Re: To gaze into your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 08:12:00 PM AEST
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this poem is really deep and I can feel the emotion in every line of this poem. I haveoften felt this way myself. This was an AWESOME poem!

Re: To gaze into your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 01:01:59 PM AEST
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Oh wow .. how utterly fabulous and deep those last
three words are. Your sentiments are not in vain ..

There is much longing and beauty in your words.
keep faith .. if it is to be, we, first, must dream it ..

painfully beautiful ~

~Breezy

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