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Array ( [sid] => 132902 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i feel [time] => 2007-03-20 15:26:20 [hometext] => i just feel like it's all been ripped out of me... [bodytext] => i feel let down.
angry.
lost.

putrid.
broken.
i feel so stupid...

my best efforts feel worthless.
my energy rusted.
wasted!
i feel
forgotten...
and it makes me feel so rotten.

i feel guilty.
drowned in self-pity.
numb.
exhausted.
achey...

you knew i needed to you today...
and yesterday...
but you had to put me down!
ALL of you.
you had to crush me down.
after you'd burned my fuse.

... just so you could shout at me once more.
after you watched me fall,
you lost it with me once more...
even though i've cut no more sores...!

... I HATE YOU ALL!

i f******* sick of you're abuse!!!!!!!!!!!

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 48 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => Mod 9 3/20/07 Bleep word. Please bleep the whole word. Thanks . [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

i feel

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 03:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i feel let down.
angry.
lost.

putrid.
broken.
i feel so stupid...

my best efforts feel worthless.
my energy rusted.
wasted!
i feel
forgotten...
and it makes me feel so rotten.

i feel guilty.
drowned in self-pity.
numb.
exhausted.
achey...

you knew i needed to you today...
and yesterday...
but you had to put me down!
ALL of you.
you had to crush me down.
after you'd burned my fuse.

... just so you could shout at me once more.
after you watched me fall,
you lost it with me once more...
even though i've cut no more sores...!

... I HATE YOU ALL!

i f******* sick of you're abuse!!!!!!!!!!!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2007-03-20 15:26:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 05:17:07 AM AEST
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The feeling of anger, hate, and despair are all felt in this write. It cut me so deeply young lady. I truly hope that you may one day feel the love, peace, and joy that you so desire young lady.

sadaddy

Re: i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 07:12:24 PM AEST
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Good, get the anger out!! Good way to vent, best wishes to you..
-Drapes

Re: i feel (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 14th August 2020 @ 07:07:26 PM AEST
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Had a few days like that.............

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