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Array ( [sid] => 132883 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shooting Star [time] => 2007-03-19 22:25:06 [hometext] => ~Crash, crash and burn, but never, never learn. (If I'm out of practice, it probably shows.) [bodytext] =>




Though loftier deliverance endears the waiting eyes,
A violet belligerence besmears the saline skies;
Where stouter hearts reap ever-afters softer souls sew sighs
A race of all abandon stands, for dawn is on the rise.


Celerity itself alone cannot escape the vise
Of fragile phantom dreams come true, on which the heart relies
It burns a trail of ice and hail, a scream with no reply
And sails the skyline through and through, a beacon to the shy


It knew of haste, for sloth should waste the life within it wrought
And but a taste of hesitance would taint the cold whole “caught”
For moments spared too oft ensnared determination’s plot
As thus it seemed, it streamed away the strands to fight the knot.


But fate had known that one so flown across the eyes of night
Whose sole regard regaled the Bard, and sang the dream of light
Could ne’er shut its heart as tight, for fleeing needs no might
And thus it beamed, the moon seduced a whisper running bright.


Its tongue spun silver, played in gold, its center drank the gaze
Of fervent wordless murmurs for a way beyond the maze
For when the harsher rays abate, fragile feeling stays
And thus it gleamed, a splash of sun the frozen core waylays


And round and round the spiel it spun did rouse the hidden hearth
Encased in ice to ‘scape the price, the secret cost of mirth
A life of light is bound to shade, the price of freedom worth
Yet nonetheless in all is blessed the song of Hope at birth.


And thus it was, what once was free would sacrifice Eternity
For but a glimpse, a passing glance, the beauty of dependency
Entranced, the final starlit dance forever ends in tragedy
And thus it dreamed, a shooting star was born of our humanity.


So if you spy a sky besmirched with flame from end to end
A streak connecting dots to fly to unforeseen finish
Close your eyes, and dream the dream the fragile heart defends—

For every shooting star is only waiting for its wish.

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Shooting Star

Contributed by EternitysLyre on Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 10:25:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes








Though loftier deliverance endears the waiting eyes,
A violet belligerence besmears the saline skies;
Where stouter hearts reap ever-afters softer souls sew sighs
A race of all abandon stands, for dawn is on the rise.


Celerity itself alone cannot escape the vise
Of fragile phantom dreams come true, on which the heart relies
It burns a trail of ice and hail, a scream with no reply
And sails the skyline through and through, a beacon to the shy


It knew of haste, for sloth should waste the life within it wrought
And but a taste of hesitance would taint the cold whole “caught”
For moments spared too oft ensnared determination’s plot
As thus it seemed, it streamed away the strands to fight the knot.


But fate had known that one so flown across the eyes of night
Whose sole regard regaled the Bard, and sang the dream of light
Could ne’er shut its heart as tight, for fleeing needs no might
And thus it beamed, the moon seduced a whisper running bright.


Its tongue spun silver, played in gold, its center drank the gaze
Of fervent wordless murmurs for a way beyond the maze
For when the harsher rays abate, fragile feeling stays
And thus it gleamed, a splash of sun the frozen core waylays


And round and round the spiel it spun did rouse the hidden hearth
Encased in ice to ‘scape the price, the secret cost of mirth
A life of light is bound to shade, the price of freedom worth
Yet nonetheless in all is blessed the song of Hope at birth.


And thus it was, what once was free would sacrifice Eternity
For but a glimpse, a passing glance, the beauty of dependency
Entranced, the final starlit dance forever ends in tragedy
And thus it dreamed, a shooting star was born of our humanity.


So if you spy a sky besmirched with flame from end to end
A streak connecting dots to fly to unforeseen finish
Close your eyes, and dream the dream the fragile heart defends—

For every shooting star is only waiting for its wish.





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Re: Shooting Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 11:06:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful words and rhythm, you kept the poem going. At first I looked at it and thought how big it was, but then I started reading it, and it ended before I knew it.
Take care,
David


Re: Shooting Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 06:48:51 PM AEST
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31 reads and 1 comment.....disgraceful.
I apologize for all those readers before me.

You are a flawless rhymer and a poet of incredible talent my friend. I have NEVER read a post from you that was less then perfection.

Out of practice...lol hardly

Barkeep!!
Larry


Re: Shooting Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 06:15:38 PM AEST
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I, like Larry, am surprised at the lack of comments you have received on this outstanding write of yours.
I absolutely loved every bit of it especially that last line:
For every shooting star is only waiting for its wish.
You nailed it. Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful piece of poetry with us~
warm hugs,
sue m


Re: Shooting Star (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 07:15:34 AM AEST
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well woven words, beautifully written, this line is fabulous:"And thus it beamed, the moon seduced a whisper running bright."

hugs n' love nessa




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