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that my heart aches from loving you.

that at times i feel like i can't stand to see you.

Can i tell you.....

that i liked you once apon a time.

and now i just am fed up with you.

Can i tell you

I hate that the fact that your with her.

I fake a smile. Just waiting for her to hurt you so i can hurt her.

Can i tell you

that we can't be everything that you want us to be.

it takes time for something like that to occur.

Can i tell you

that i want her to treat you good.
that deep down in my heart i know she won't .

Can i tell you

that at night i just wish for the best

that this ***** is Driving me to the edge.

Can i Tell you

that i ask why you look so familiar.

that seem sincere.

Can i tell you

That i will never tell you these things i say,
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can i tell you.....

Contributed by Butterfly_Of_Passion on Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 09:45:45 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



can i tell you...

that my heart aches from loving you.

that at times i feel like i can't stand to see you.

Can i tell you.....

that i liked you once apon a time.

and now i just am fed up with you.

Can i tell you

I hate that the fact that your with her.

I fake a smile. Just waiting for her to hurt you so i can hurt her.

Can i tell you

that we can't be everything that you want us to be.

it takes time for something like that to occur.

Can i tell you

that i want her to treat you good.
that deep down in my heart i know she won't .

Can i tell you

that at night i just wish for the best

that this ***** is Driving me to the edge.

Can i Tell you

that i ask why you look so familiar.

that seem sincere.

Can i tell you

That i will never tell you these things i say,




Copyright © Butterfly_Of_Passion ... [ 2007-03-19 21:45:45]
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Re: can i tell you..... (User Rating: 1 )
by kelkel on Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 01:06:37 PM AEST
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Lots of emotion i loved this poem good write




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