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Array ( [sid] => 132831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Player [time] => 2007-03-18 12:42:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why must I live
with sorrow in my heart.
You left me and
tore my world
apart.

We have three kids
how do I explain.
You took off
in A hurry
and caught the
first plane.

They always say
the grass is greener
on the other side.
But I dont see you
going far with the
way you lie.

Now here you are
six months later.
But I said
goodbye I dont
need A player.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 52 [informant] => kelkel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

The Player

Contributed by kelkel on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 12:42:21 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Why must I live
with sorrow in my heart.
You left me and
tore my world
apart.

We have three kids
how do I explain.
You took off
in A hurry
and caught the
first plane.

They always say
the grass is greener
on the other side.
But I dont see you
going far with the
way you lie.

Now here you are
six months later.
But I said
goodbye I dont
need A player.

Copyright © kelkel ... [ 2007-03-18 12:42:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Player (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:00:27 PM AEST
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sad, but nicely done. hope everything works out for you

Re: The Player (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:21:59 PM AEST
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yeah I know all about the players. this is great.
He was a jerk be glad he gone well you are so lol.

Loriann

Re: The Player (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:46:18 PM AEST
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Sad indeed...is forgiving impossible?
Would you want to be forgiven?
It's a tough one.....but people make mistakes that can't be undone? What do they do pay forever....?
Who am I to ask?
Good luck with this one...

Re: The Player (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 04:55:14 PM AEST
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Powerful words I see here. No one needs a player. Sue x

Re: The Player (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 09:41:30 PM AEST
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Strong emotional flow

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