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And still I feel disgustingly dirty
I've cried oceans of tears
And yet still I feel unworthy.
I ache for a loss
I have longed for, for years
And though I've done what I had to
There's still an unsettling fear.
The cold bed and blanket
To end past fun
Doesn't take away the pain
Of what needs to be done.
A moment in time
Lost in the 'twighlight'
Now count to ten
As you lose trace of the light.
Time has now come
Reality is here
You've lost all sense
Of what you ever held dear.
The decision was made
No doubt it was right
But I'm no longer flying
As high as a kite.
A life choice brought forward
Before it was due
There's no-one to blame
Except me and you.
I walk through the door
Making it ever so more real
Not looking back-
I don't want to feel ! ! !
There's a pain left inside me
Which only I will know
I want this memory to be over
Just let happiness flow . . . [comments] => 5 [counter] => 311 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Tamara [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

NUMB

Contributed by Tamara on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 02:27:34 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Unclean. . . I scrub for hours
And still I feel disgustingly dirty
I've cried oceans of tears
And yet still I feel unworthy.
I ache for a loss
I have longed for, for years
And though I've done what I had to
There's still an unsettling fear.
The cold bed and blanket
To end past fun
Doesn't take away the pain
Of what needs to be done.
A moment in time
Lost in the 'twighlight'
Now count to ten
As you lose trace of the light.
Time has now come
Reality is here
You've lost all sense
Of what you ever held dear.
The decision was made
No doubt it was right
But I'm no longer flying
As high as a kite.
A life choice brought forward
Before it was due
There's no-one to blame
Except me and you.
I walk through the door
Making it ever so more real
Not looking back-
I don't want to feel ! ! !
There's a pain left inside me
Which only I will know
I want this memory to be over
Just let happiness flow . . .

Copyright © Tamara ... [ 2007-03-18 02:27:34]
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Re: NUMB (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:18:56 AM AEST
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Wow, you did a great job with this write.

I want this memory to be over
Just let happiness flow . . .

I luv that it ends on a happy note.big huggs,
emy

Re: NUMB (User Rating: 1 )
by CrazyBoy on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 04:58:29 AM AEST
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well written,-You've lost all sense
Of what you ever held dear.
i know this feeling descibes a journey

Re: NUMB (User Rating: 1 )
by kalbime_aldin on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 08:47:40 AM AEST
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wow very very good i love it it explains alot about how you feel and alot more keep it up
xxx Nikki

Re: NUMB (User Rating: 1 )
by kelkel on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 12:50:11 PM AEST
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I love this poem very nice write it says alot good job

Re: NUMB (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 04:03:50 PM AEST
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A great job indeed and you will get there...to the other side of all that pain..I can tell in this poem...you want that and so it shall be. Hugs

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