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Array ( [sid] => 132818 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Another Day [time] => 2007-03-18 00:17:54 [hometext] => Keeping him out, but wanting him near [bodytext] => Not to long ago,
I could feel your love.
It kept me safe,
It kept me above.
But we're not near now,
And I'm dying inside.
I have forsaken myself.
Part of my soul has died.
Hiding in the corner,
Covering my tear stained face.
My soul screams,
I need to get out of this place.
Leave me alone,
You can't be here.
Even though I love it,
When you're near.
You can't feel this,
I don't want you to see.
Everything that's being torn,
From inside of me.
I can't be here,
I need to go.
There's so much that hurts,
But I don't want you to know.
I know this is crazy,
And I'm being absurd.
So just ignore me,
Don't listen to a word.
I'll be fine tomorrow,
And everything will be ok.
I'll hide my broken soul,
For just another day. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Fairiepsycho [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Just Another Day

Contributed by Fairiepsycho on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 12:17:54 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Not to long ago,
I could feel your love.
It kept me safe,
It kept me above.
But we're not near now,
And I'm dying inside.
I have forsaken myself.
Part of my soul has died.
Hiding in the corner,
Covering my tear stained face.
My soul screams,
I need to get out of this place.
Leave me alone,
You can't be here.
Even though I love it,
When you're near.
You can't feel this,
I don't want you to see.
Everything that's being torn,
From inside of me.
I can't be here,
I need to go.
There's so much that hurts,
But I don't want you to know.
I know this is crazy,
And I'm being absurd.
So just ignore me,
Don't listen to a word.
I'll be fine tomorrow,
And everything will be ok.
I'll hide my broken soul,
For just another day.

Copyright © Fairiepsycho ... [ 2007-03-18 00:17:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Just Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 12:31:52 AM AEST
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I'm in awe that no one commented on this. Not to mention that i'm plain in awe of this stunning peice of true to life love poem. your passion and sadness and desperation are screaming out to the reader. first time i've read your writting, won't be the last. Very exsposed style you have. A very strong peice of writting, i felt every word along with every emotion.

Ben

Re: Just Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 01:04:22 PM AEST
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Excellent piece.
Sometimes it's just not our day
You will be fine, but you can't always push away.
You take care, girl.
You're the only one that knows what you need to do.

Re: Just Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 10:19:55 PM AEST
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geez, i surely can relate to this...how wonderfully you have conveyed your feelings here. thanks for sharing
~priss

Re: Just Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Smartie on Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 08:20:26 PM AEST
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This is so amazing
Very well expressed
Each emotion was felt
Keep Writing
Your amazing

Re: Just Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 06:09:21 AM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings.....

love n' hugs nessa

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