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Homeless
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 09:34:43 PM in AEST
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You know it's not easy when you're left all alone. Your thoughts creep up behind you and kick you out of your home.
Not the house that you live in but the home of your mind, and once you get lost outside of there the way back is difficult to find.
I've been lost for a while trying to make my way back. It's getting darker all the time, the flame, my candle now lacks.
Well, I hope you still love me even when I'm homeless, and I hope you look for a while when I'm lost in my mind's abyss.
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2007-03-17 21:34:43]
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Re: Homeless
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 11:10:53 PM AEST
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| Home is where the heart is, where ever that place is try and return or duplicate it in your future....all souls have to have a sense of belonging....even if this becomes your home..you belong. So write to us your new home and that will be the beginning..Good provokative write. welcome home.Hugs |
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Re: Homeless
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 01:15:01 PM AEST
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Great poem of loneliness, rightful name.
Just keep writting and we'll keep listening.
You have our support on your journey |
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