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One man
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 04:59:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My heart is broken, bruised, and lost
Sometimes it seems no one can pay the cost
To lead my campain to salvation
I tell you
I feel less than a one man nation
My soul is cract, my lungs are black
And the one to save, I lack
Sometimes it feels like
I'm on my march to certain doom
Hoping she will find me by noon
*****
Noon has to past, and I feel last
Younger than a nation of one
I venture forward
For to my head is your gun
Feeling less than one man
I'm totally confused
You know
I'm just like you
One nation
Under God
Will keep my heart from sob'
I would wear a kilt
In time of mourn
I will keep my hope
Though it is torn
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rhei76
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2007-03-17 16:59:16]
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Re: One man
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 11:28:17 PM AEST
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If I told you that love comes and goes with the tide,
Would you gain some pride?
Then risk to love once more,
What for?
A new door,
of loving self.
You are the master of love,
You can chose to rise above,
My spirit dove.
Keep faith Rhei....Hugs ND |
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Re: One man
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 04:29:13 AM AEST
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Wonderful chose of words. with good flow.
FRANCO. |
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Re: One man
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 04:24:11 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. I can feel the emotion in this poem! |
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Re: One man
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 07:53:04 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy |
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