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Array ( [sid] => 132756 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => confused and mislead [time] => 2007-03-15 19:27:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sit here in a daze,
yet amazed at my surroundings,
Wondering where i should be .
I sit here with a frown
wondering how my life
got turned upside down.
only after our encounter.
Was it your smooth like presence
or the essence, of your manhood?
Wanting to embrace everything that i could,
with all of my power.
Stopping the hands of time exactly on that hour.
Wanting for you to be my husband
and for me to be your wife.
For eternity, meaning for
the rest of my life,
not ever having to go through pain and strife.
As i sit here in a daze, yet amazed but instead mislead.
As negative thoughts fill my head. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 2 [informant] => rubyreddangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

confused and mislead

Contributed by rubyreddangel on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 07:27:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I sit here in a daze,
yet amazed at my surroundings,
Wondering where i should be .
I sit here with a frown
wondering how my life
got turned upside down.
only after our encounter.
Was it your smooth like presence
or the essence, of your manhood?
Wanting to embrace everything that i could,
with all of my power.
Stopping the hands of time exactly on that hour.
Wanting for you to be my husband
and for me to be your wife.
For eternity, meaning for
the rest of my life,
not ever having to go through pain and strife.
As i sit here in a daze, yet amazed but instead mislead.
As negative thoughts fill my head.

Copyright © rubyreddangel ... [ 2007-03-15 19:27:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: confused and mislead (User Rating: 1 )
by Grownbabygirl on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 08:32:15 PM AEST
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Rubyredd, I can really relate to your poem and I hope everything turns out fine for you. Good write and thanks for sharing.

Re: confused and mislead (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 10:22:34 PM AEST
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I can relate to this so much...thx for sharing.

Re: confused and mislead (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 07:37:11 PM AEST
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I'm sure a lot of people can really relate to this. Nicely done... it's full of emotion and you did a nice job of conveying it. I hope everything works out. Keep it up.

Re: confused and mislead (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 12:58:44 AM AEST
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nice write... i know exactly how you feel...thanks for sharing.
~priss

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