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Array ( [sid] => 13273 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The day you were born [time] => 2003-02-25 08:00:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem when my daughter was born and I have given it to many of my friends when they became parents. [bodytext] => On the day you were born my heart was bursting with love,
I said a little prayer and I thanked the lord above.
I cried as you wrapped your tiny hand around mine,
I knew no greater joy in this world I would ever find.
I have a little person now that I can help to grow,
I can't wait to sit with you and teach you all the things you need to know.
I'll try my best to give you everything you need,
There's nothing I won't do for you because you'll always be a part of me,
I hope one day when your older my dear little one ,
You'll understand the unconditional love I have for you because I am your
MUM [comments] => 5 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 21 [informant] => kathy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The day you were born

Contributed by kathy on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

On the day you were born my heart was bursting with love,
I said a little prayer and I thanked the lord above.
I cried as you wrapped your tiny hand around mine,
I knew no greater joy in this world I would ever find.
I have a little person now that I can help to grow,
I can't wait to sit with you and teach you all the things you need to know.
I'll try my best to give you everything you need,
There's nothing I won't do for you because you'll always be a part of me,
I hope one day when your older my dear little one ,
You'll understand the unconditional love I have for you because I am your
MUM

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Re: The day you were born (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 08:24:03 AM AEST
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AAWW this was so precious,Nicely done! Christina

Re: The day you were born (User Rating: 1 )
by kathy on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 05:42:26 PM AEST
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Thank-you for your comment Christina. I'm not sure if any of my poems are good, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
kathy

Re: The day you were born (User Rating: 1 )
by xlguesswho14xx on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 03:52:04 PM AEST
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this poem is so sweet..i liked it alot

Re: The day you were born (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 10:37:18 PM AEST
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To speak so lovingly shows a deep compassion within your soul. I am touched and hope to read more of your work.

Re: The day you were born (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 02:08:46 AM AEST
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Very touching poem....I love it...I'm sure your daughter will or did also....
Jenni

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