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[title] => Falling in love ......?
[time] => 2007-03-14 08:19:10
[hometext] => Some women fall in love only to have their hearts broken, time and time again...How can they ever trust love and learn how beautiful it CAN BE?......
[bodytext] => I sit at my desk and watch from afar
My colleagues laughing thru their day,I find so bizaare
My heart is aching,my stomache sick,
My nails bitten, down to the quick,
Why oh why? is it only me?
That men break my heart to such degree?
I give them love, I show I care,
I'm loving, giving, faithful, fair
Do I have a sign across my head?
MUG inside - upon me tread!
Use me, abuse me, have your fun
Then walk away once you are done
Those intense moments when we were alone
Those raunchy chats we had over phone
The most intimate moments as we lay in bed
When you declared undying love, with the three words you said
You drew me in,inch by inch, watched me give you all I had to give
Then when you just walked away, took part of me with you, not caring how I would live
Without your touch, your sweet embrace, .....your kisses of desire, you take all without trace
You gave no warnings, no tell tale sign,you took your heart with you, and also mine
I'm nothing now, my soul is empty, my life non existant not fullfilled like it's meant to be
And do you feel guilt? of the destruction you left? do you even know?.... im so hurt and bereft?
I should be used to this now, it's happened again, men come and go and none ever explain
If only they knew what they leave behind, my tormented body, soul and mind .....
And I am supposed to look and find love again?
Not look too soon, just wait and see when ....
I think I can no longer take all this pain...
I see only that the men I met would be the ones to gain
So I sit at my desk, and watch from afar,
My colleagues laughing thru their day, and I find that bizaare!
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Falling in love ......?
Contributed by
malcolmsdreamgirl
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Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 08:19:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit at my desk and watch from afar
My colleagues laughing thru their day,I find so bizaare
My heart is aching,my stomache sick,
My nails bitten, down to the quick,
Why oh why? is it only me?
That men break my heart to such degree?
I give them love, I show I care,
I'm loving, giving, faithful, fair
Do I have a sign across my head?
MUG inside - upon me tread!
Use me, abuse me, have your fun
Then walk away once you are done
Those intense moments when we were alone
Those raunchy chats we had over phone
The most intimate moments as we lay in bed
When you declared undying love, with the three words you said
You drew me in,inch by inch, watched me give you all I had to give
Then when you just walked away, took part of me with you, not caring how I would live
Without your touch, your sweet embrace, .....your kisses of desire, you take all without trace
You gave no warnings, no tell tale sign,you took your heart with you, and also mine
I'm nothing now, my soul is empty, my life non existant not fullfilled like it's meant to be
And do you feel guilt? of the destruction you left? do you even know?.... im so hurt and bereft?
I should be used to this now, it's happened again, men come and go and none ever explain
If only they knew what they leave behind, my tormented body, soul and mind .....
And I am supposed to look and find love again?
Not look too soon, just wait and see when ....
I think I can no longer take all this pain...
I see only that the men I met would be the ones to gain
So I sit at my desk, and watch from afar,
My colleagues laughing thru their day, and I find that bizaare!
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Re: Falling in love ......?
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by Nothingness on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 10:12:08 AM AEST
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Well done! *hugs* so sad! I know what it feels like =( so hang in there sweetie you seem like a sweet girl and I know someone will be there to loved you soon enough ^_~ trust me. Well done strong emotional write I loved it but I felt for you *hugs*
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Re: Falling in love ......?
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 11:34:51 AM AEST
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malcolmsdreamgirl, Once again you present us with your poetic brillence as our hunger for more of you is fed by your words of meaningful thought. Its sad that this situation happens over and over again as there are way too many players taking advantage of others for their own benefit. I will never understand how one could mess with anothers emotional being to rep the benefits and then simply walk away. I hope you know how Honored I am to have this chance to be amongst your greatness of talent and to have your friendship. Wonderful poem.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: Falling in love ......?
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 11:45:56 AM AEST
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"THANK YOU " to you both for your kind comments...
For anyone else that may read this piece it is some thoughts and words on how I feel... a dear friend of mine feels ....as once again she has had her heart broken ....
I have been so lucky in my love ... I wish so greatly that one day hers ( and other broken hearts out there) will have their final day of happiness ever after ... thank you ... |
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Re: Falling in love ......?
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by brew on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 09:21:02 PM AEST
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Love,the infamous,.....3 little words, They make you and break you......they take you and fake you...
pfft........say it all with the heart, and Mean it....dont make one fall and then struggle. Yeah there is love and there is LOVE.......yeah you love and then Fall in love. But why do ones have to take what they create, and break it? I cant answer, for I am one who hasn t, yet......found THE LOVE.One Im intruly in love with.
Great post, and very sad, and flet
Brew~ |
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Re: Falling in love ......?
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by xxthexforgotenxonexx on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 11:12:22 PM AEST
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awe this is so sad. the only thing i have to say is that the only true love is the type that you dont have to look for, theres someone out there whos going to think you're amazing and never ever want to break your heart...whats weird is that you'll find him at the least expected time, fate works weird like that =]. hang on strong and you'll get through it.
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Re: Falling in love ......?
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 01:59:09 PM AEST
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This is so sad why can't the right people just meet at the right time?and leave all the loosers and abusers to the way side of oblivion. a most touching write. hang in there it's got to happen sooner or later though in this day and age i can honestly say i wouldn't wanna be young again, not with all the uncertainty, it's as though there's an epidemic of rage and anger in every getting in the way of solid relationships.
Ben
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