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Warm and steadfastly beating
From the
Stronger Hearts
I've known

Seemed they were always around
While My Warm Heart goes on
Pulsing hard and racing
Awaiting its only turn

Strong Hearts
With their long and icy fingers
Do battle and give warning
Strong Hearts
Can we really win?
With Millions of Warm Hearts
Still continue trying

My Warm Heart
Is growing weary
Will it all ever be put right?

Strong Hearts
With your long cold fingers
Reaching out
Into external spaces
Be prepared to turn
The very grains of time

Strong Hearts
NOW’s the time
I'm Thinking
Warm Hearts
The battle has just begun

Whisper
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Stronger Hearts

Contributed by Whisper on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:16:09 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

With the my Warm Heart
Warm and steadfastly beating
From the
Stronger Hearts
I've known

Seemed they were always around
While My Warm Heart goes on
Pulsing hard and racing
Awaiting its only turn

Strong Hearts
With their long and icy fingers
Do battle and give warning
Strong Hearts
Can we really win?
With Millions of Warm Hearts
Still continue trying

My Warm Heart
Is growing weary
Will it all ever be put right?

Strong Hearts
With your long cold fingers
Reaching out
Into external spaces
Be prepared to turn
The very grains of time

Strong Hearts
NOW’s the time
I'm Thinking
Warm Hearts
The battle has just begun

Whisper

Copyright Â© Whisper ... [ 2007-03-14 02:16:09]
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Re: Stronger Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 03:13:07 AM AEST
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not much to say other than powerful voice. your message was unclear to me in some parts, but we don't write for others we write for ourselves.your message was created in a way that i cannot grasp, afteralll only the writer can truly understand their own poem. i still liked this very much so please do not take offense, it is not meant in a bad way. thanks for posting
-kyle

Re: Stronger Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 03:35:53 AM AEST
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It is not a battle of some few hearts but a battle that had to be fought by every living heart at the latter part of the life.
So let our heart cheer for the strong and the battling hearts.
beautifully written.

FRANCO

Re: Stronger Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 11:15:04 AM AEST
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what a joy to read this write,nice done.

Re: Stronger Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 09:06:20 PM AEST
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"...Be prepared to turn
The very grains of time..."

Lovely & Brilliant

Peace
Yang

Re: Stronger Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 11:46:16 AM AEST
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i like it

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