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I let you walk all over me.
I let you make fun of my hair.
I let you tease me about how I walk.
How I talk.
How I act.
How I breathe!
I've lived the hellish nightmare that is your bliss.
I've faced down the demons that were your angels.
You made me live in YOUR world, where only YOUR dreams existed!
What about me?!?!
Do I not matter?!?!
I let you think that you were all I ever needed.
You whispered in my ear, promises of love and no more chaos.
You buried me alive with your shovel of masked hatred and your dirt of lies!
Why did I ever trust you?
So many times I beat myself up over you!
You laughed in my face and let me know of my incapabilities!
And still I opposed nothing.
I despised you, even though you were my world and all I could ever love!
You WERE my world. . . [comments] => 3 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 6 [informant] => artjunkiekyle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

My World

Contributed by artjunkiekyle on Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 08:55:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I let you make me feel as if only your world exists.
I let you walk all over me.
I let you make fun of my hair.
I let you tease me about how I walk.
How I talk.
How I act.
How I breathe!
I've lived the hellish nightmare that is your bliss.
I've faced down the demons that were your angels.
You made me live in YOUR world, where only YOUR dreams existed!
What about me?!?!
Do I not matter?!?!
I let you think that you were all I ever needed.
You whispered in my ear, promises of love and no more chaos.
You buried me alive with your shovel of masked hatred and your dirt of lies!
Why did I ever trust you?
So many times I beat myself up over you!
You laughed in my face and let me know of my incapabilities!
And still I opposed nothing.
I despised you, even though you were my world and all I could ever love!
You WERE my world. . .

Copyright © artjunkiekyle ... [ 2007-03-13 20:55:38]
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Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:56:12 AM AEST
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oh kyle, you have conveyed your feelings with such strength here. we must indeed live for ourselves and what we believe in and not let others drag us down, whether it be intentional or not. love is not bringing you down or taking away. great job, thanks for sharing. lots of love!
~priss

Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:47:48 PM AEST
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"When worlds collide" things come crashing down and in this revealing piece are the elements to see that kind of person coming beforehand. There is a balance of worlds as respect equals gravity with enough in place we obtain orbits to each other that are healthy and mutually beneficial.
Glad you cleaned your world up after that ice age.

Well Done

Peace
Yang

Re: My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 05:46:11 PM AEST
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Kyle .. this is a terrible fate to befall a human .. loving that
which cannot truly love us back. But, you know, being supportive
does not mean you have to be too accomodating. Love,
IMHO, is a two way street and we "meet" our love halfway.

I know this hurts. I am akin to this emotion, hun. I hope
you have worked, (or are doing it now) through this.

Keep writing .. it is a small release of sorts.

*hugs*
~Breezy

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