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Array ( [sid] => 132670 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cold [time] => 2007-03-13 16:51:00 [hometext] => If you couldnt tell, this came from a pretty depressing state of mind. [bodytext] => I feel cold
not the "brr" cold
but an inner cold
one from within

one you cant escape
no matter how many layers
no matter how warm
no matter how many people pretend to care

I dont need advice
I dont need someone to talk to
I dont need alone time
I need to cry

for once in my life
I wanna give up being strong
let down my gaurd
and cry

I need to cry with someone
someone who cares
someone who will listen
someone whos there for me
someone who wont abandon me

i want someone
to listen
to help
(but most of all)
to care. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 32 [informant] => aloneinthememory [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Cold

Contributed by aloneinthememory on Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 04:51:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I feel cold
not the "brr" cold
but an inner cold
one from within

one you cant escape
no matter how many layers
no matter how warm
no matter how many people pretend to care

I dont need advice
I dont need someone to talk to
I dont need alone time
I need to cry

for once in my life
I wanna give up being strong
let down my gaurd
and cry

I need to cry with someone
someone who cares
someone who will listen
someone whos there for me
someone who wont abandon me

i want someone
to listen
to help
(but most of all)
to care.

Copyright © aloneinthememory ... [ 2007-03-13 16:51:00]
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Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Harimitsu on Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 08:58:38 PM AEST
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That's it. When true feelings come to life from the words you write... when you express the very foundation of what is truly keeping you up. That is the very definition of poetry. :) Sad but true. Every one at some point needs the same thing you do, someone to just be there and give a crap. I know, been there myself. Just know, everything has a way of working out in the end. Very nice poem.

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 11:29:41 PM AEST
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I agree with some of the last comment. true poetry. and when you have sertain emotions and pain etc. running through you, you have an urge to lose control and break down. and alot of times it takes only someone who cares to lend you a shoulder. I wish you nothing but the very best now and in the future,
always.
justin

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 04:37:14 AM AEST
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I can so relate to this one....thx for sharing.

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by DrowningHeart on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 10:46:56 AM AEST
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What an emotional piece of poetry. Like many I can also relate. I guess lifes rollercoaster has it ups and downs and well I have experienced more downs then ups. I dont know how long I can be strong for....

Thanks for sharing.

Blessed be,
D

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Rockalife66 on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 03:19:39 PM AEST
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So emotional. I just feel the exact same. If I were there, I'd care :)

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