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prone on his back in the brig. It was a look of new respect
for the tough little guy . He spoke across to him.“ Hey mick, you
likin’ the sea yet?”
From the foul weather gear came a low curse and something
about the grog Larsen had given him. With a moan he gave
back a few words.“ That’s a bad drink
to give a man. You’d think Gavan O”connell would be given
something witha few teeth in it. Whatever it was, it fair
makes my stomach turn. It does that and I hope to god I never
taste it again. Got any whiskey on this rat infested tugboat?”
That drew a little laugh from Olsen. “ You hear that, Brawny?
He doesn’t like our grog. Now that’s a real pity, aint it? But you
know, I don’t give a farthing if he does or doesn’t. What
do you think of that, me blasted stowaway? We got no whisky
aboard the Copenhagen. Captain’s orders. You’ll take the grog
and like it.”:

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Gavan O'Connell 14

Contributed by ramfire on Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 12:38:53 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Sven Olsen looked over at the little Irishman laying
prone on his back in the brig. It was a look of new respect
for the tough little guy . He spoke across to him.“ Hey mick, you
likin’ the sea yet?”
From the foul weather gear came a low curse and something
about the grog Larsen had given him. With a moan he gave
back a few words.“ That’s a bad drink
to give a man. You’d think Gavan O”connell would be given
something witha few teeth in it. Whatever it was, it fair
makes my stomach turn. It does that and I hope to god I never
taste it again. Got any whiskey on this rat infested tugboat?”
That drew a little laugh from Olsen. “ You hear that, Brawny?
He doesn’t like our grog. Now that’s a real pity, aint it? But you
know, I don’t give a farthing if he does or doesn’t. What
do you think of that, me blasted stowaway? We got no whisky
aboard the Copenhagen. Captain’s orders. You’ll take the grog
and like it.”:

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Re: Gavan O'Connell 14 (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 10:26:20 AM AEST
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this is diffently a story cant wait to read its ending.good write.

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