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and that's one reason why
I think it's time to say good bye

Theres dishonesty in your eyes
another reason why
I think it's time to say good bye

Quite a few nights
you didn't take the time to call
and last we talked I could tell
you had't missed me at all

Seemed as though you stopped giving "us" a try
and that's a huge reason why
I think it's time to say good bye

Though it's hard to do, you keep making me cry
and that's a good reason
I think it's time to say good bye

You always come back
But, I know what you want
You have your way, and I let you
it's time to move on

I can't just wait around and stand by
and that is why
I think it's time to say good bye

You're killing me slowly and I don't wanna die
and baby I love you but that is why
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REASONS

Contributed by sour_gurl67 on Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 08:59:09 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

There are holes in your lies
and that's one reason why
I think it's time to say good bye

Theres dishonesty in your eyes
another reason why
I think it's time to say good bye

Quite a few nights
you didn't take the time to call
and last we talked I could tell
you had't missed me at all

Seemed as though you stopped giving "us" a try
and that's a huge reason why
I think it's time to say good bye

Though it's hard to do, you keep making me cry
and that's a good reason
I think it's time to say good bye

You always come back
But, I know what you want
You have your way, and I let you
it's time to move on

I can't just wait around and stand by
and that is why
I think it's time to say good bye

You're killing me slowly and I don't wanna die
and baby I love you but that is why
I know it's time to say good bye

Copyright © sour_gurl67 ... [ 2007-03-13 08:59:09]
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Re: REASONS (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 10:13:03 AM AEST
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this another good poem.

stay strong and keep writing it helps!

Re: REASONS (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 01:22:31 AM AEST
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Good write.
Good choice of words to tell how your feeling

Whisper

Re: REASONS (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 07:11:56 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. I would always feel like this with my ex. He would do the same thing not call me and half the time when he did he would be watching porn. It got to the point where he wouldn't even be around me in school. He told me that he always didn't need to be around. I remember calling him this one night and he told me that he was busy talking to this other girl his friend because he had a lot on his mind. He couldn't even talk to me. How sad. But I hung in there because I loved him. He had played me like a fool and I took every minute of it because I thought that I loved him but after we broke up because he supposedly had had a crush on another girl I was so depressed for two months telling myself that it was my fault and I was the mistake. I got myself into that mode of thinking and that is all that I ever thought. I was also cutting badly then. But I realized that it wasn't me it was him and that I didn't love him like I thought that I did.

Honest and raw. Good poem. I liked how you repeated that line at the end of every stanza. Good poem.

Take care
Christina

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