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Carve me a smile
Make it deep and wide
Tear open my chest
Crawl right inside
Steal my last breath
Take me to the edge of death
Slit my wrists
Cut me down to size
Spit in my face
Scratch out my eyes
Cut my throat as I'm pleading
Laugh at me as I lay bleeding
Do your best to make me hurt
Disrespect me, treat me like dirt
Hate me, break me
Ignore me and forsake me
Push me aside, leave me behind
Do your best to be cruel
And treat me unkind
Turn my world black
Make me blind
Trash my faith
Crush my hope
Pull the trigger
Hang my neck from a rope
Just please dont break my heart. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 48 [informant] => bleedthelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Just One Wish.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 01:42:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Carve me a smile
Make it deep and wide
Tear open my chest
Crawl right inside
Steal my last breath
Take me to the edge of death
Slit my wrists
Cut me down to size
Spit in my face
Scratch out my eyes
Cut my throat as I'm pleading
Laugh at me as I lay bleeding
Do your best to make me hurt
Disrespect me, treat me like dirt
Hate me, break me
Ignore me and forsake me
Push me aside, leave me behind
Do your best to be cruel
And treat me unkind
Turn my world black
Make me blind
Trash my faith
Crush my hope
Pull the trigger
Hang my neck from a rope
Just please dont break my heart.

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Re: Just One Wish. (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 02:57:55 PM AEST
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That was a very powerful write of emotion. Great job

Loriann

Re: Just One Wish. (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 06:11:12 PM AEST
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truly powerful, indeed. so much emotion in this poem, i could amost feel your heart breaking. i really like this poem, although i'm sorry for your pain.
~priss

Re: Just One Wish. (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:38:23 PM AEST
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very sorry for your pain, but this is a wonderful write... intense emotions... nicely done

Re: Just One Wish. (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:44:47 PM AEST
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Great expression of emotional torture

Re: Just One Wish. (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 08:37:29 PM AEST
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Well done...and now the mending of the heart. Be strong...with all that feeling you have much love to give yet.

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