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Array ( [sid] => 132580 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => From the inside out [time] => 2007-03-11 06:42:10 [hometext] => The things we do when we're inlove.......and I'd hurt myself again, just to see you smile. [bodytext] => You let me down again, again I let you win
My sky is black again, I let you in again and again
I sell myself so cheap for you
there's nothing I can do
my heart's just weak when it comes to you, and you know this

Kill me from the inside out
You have the power, I have no doubt
and show me what hurtings all about
"More pain!", I cry
I bleed so you can stay alive

You put me down again
I hang my head and it is then, when I see you smile
I feel like an abused child
I just wanna make you laugh
I wanna let you know, my life is in your hands
you have total control

Kill me from the inside out
You have the power, I have no doubt
go on and show me what hurtings all about
"More pain!", I cry
I bleed so you can stay alive

You lips, my blood
I hurt so much
but then, you smile
and it subsides for a little while
My wrists, your knife
has this really become my life?
My love, your need
your need is to make me bleed
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From the inside out

Contributed by girlg0newrong on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 06:42:10 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



You let me down again, again I let you win
My sky is black again, I let you in again and again
I sell myself so cheap for you
there's nothing I can do
my heart's just weak when it comes to you, and you know this

Kill me from the inside out
You have the power, I have no doubt
and show me what hurtings all about
"More pain!", I cry
I bleed so you can stay alive

You put me down again
I hang my head and it is then, when I see you smile
I feel like an abused child
I just wanna make you laugh
I wanna let you know, my life is in your hands
you have total control

Kill me from the inside out
You have the power, I have no doubt
go on and show me what hurtings all about
"More pain!", I cry
I bleed so you can stay alive

You lips, my blood
I hurt so much
but then, you smile
and it subsides for a little while
My wrists, your knife
has this really become my life?
My love, your need
your need is to make me bleed




Copyright © girlg0newrong ... [ 2007-03-11 06:42:10]
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Re: From the inside out (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 03:02:53 PM AEST
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very powerful write. I love the flow of the words. Very nice .

Loriann


Re: From the inside out (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 10:09:38 PM AEST
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very dark.. but full of emotion


Re: From the inside out (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 07:08:14 AM AEST
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Dark and full of emotions. This was a really good poem. I can relate to the fact that when you are in love with someone you would do anything to make them smile even if it is dragging yourself down to a low level. It is hard. This was a well expressed poem.

Take care
Christina-xo




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