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Array ( [sid] => 132568 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Feelings I Hide Away [time] => 2007-03-10 16:09:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => How can I make you understand .
The love I have for you is more then as a friend.

I dream of your gentle soft touch.
Oh how I desire this and more so much.

To look co deep into your eyes.
To show my true feelings and vanish this disguise.

I keep my true feelings deep inside of me.
Hopeing someday you will open your eyes and see.

I tell you how special and dear you are.
even though you are away so far.

I owe you so much for all youi have done for me.
Because finally my love I can now see.

I can see now you are always there.
See how much as a friend you truely care.

But I want you as more then as a friend who cares.
I want you in my life as a mate that together we have things to share.

I want all my dreams to become reality.
For the day to come and you want and love me.

But til you see how my feelings for you are strong and true.
I have to hide it all away and wear a disguise in front of you.

Hopeing that some day you will understand.
And we can be lovers and not just friends. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Loriann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
The Feelings I Hide Away

Contributed by Loriann on Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 04:09:46 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



How can I make you understand .
The love I have for you is more then as a friend.

I dream of your gentle soft touch.
Oh how I desire this and more so much.

To look co deep into your eyes.
To show my true feelings and vanish this disguise.

I keep my true feelings deep inside of me.
Hopeing someday you will open your eyes and see.

I tell you how special and dear you are.
even though you are away so far.

I owe you so much for all youi have done for me.
Because finally my love I can now see.

I can see now you are always there.
See how much as a friend you truely care.

But I want you as more then as a friend who cares.
I want you in my life as a mate that together we have things to share.

I want all my dreams to become reality.
For the day to come and you want and love me.

But til you see how my feelings for you are strong and true.
I have to hide it all away and wear a disguise in front of you.

Hopeing that some day you will understand.
And we can be lovers and not just friends.




Copyright © Loriann ... [ 2007-03-10 16:09:46]
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Re: The Feelings I Hide Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Grownbabygirl on Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 07:26:02 PM AEST
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Take a risk Loriann, let him know how you feel. At least in the end, you'll know the real deal. Good write, keep sharing...:-)


Re: The Feelings I Hide Away (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 01:03:21 AM AEST
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Loriann, This is a beautiful heartfelt composure by you. I kind of agree with the other commenter as he needs to know your true feelings for him. I want to thank you once again for giving us such a wonderful poem to savor from you and sharing a little more of yourself with all of us.

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Re: The Feelings I Hide Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 10:11:18 PM AEST
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it seems like you have a lot hidden inside of you... why not take a chance and let it out?




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