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Array ( [sid] => 132532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Desperate to Her Touch [time] => 2007-03-09 10:58:57 [hometext] => This is a true example of a name poem. I made this for my girlfriend Lori. If you look closely, the first 4 lines in each stanza spells her first name and her last name is spelled by the first letter of the last line in each stanza. Lori Gaddho. [bodytext] => Loving you,
Only come normally,
Right before I see your face,
Instantly following you,
Gruling like a dog without its bone.

Looking like a mannequin,
Once in a lifetime,
Really puts me,
Into my place.
Along with knowing I'm not alone.

Lurking around a corner,
On a cold winter's night,
Rights my wrongs,
If I can make you mine.
Dumbfounded to have to prone.

Lust propels me,
Onto your heart,
Right before I head,
Into your soul.
Drastically making myself known.

Losing only,
One thing,
Realizing how much,
I miss you.
Hoping that it's grown.

Lapping her conscience,
Only to make me desperate to her touch,
Reminiscing about the good times we've had
I fall.
Only to realize that we've gone home.

-Thank you, Lori! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 2 [informant] => nvn_jacobs [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Desperate to Her Touch

Contributed by nvn_jacobs on Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 10:58:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Loving you,
Only come normally,
Right before I see your face,
Instantly following you,
Gruling like a dog without its bone.

Looking like a mannequin,
Once in a lifetime,
Really puts me,
Into my place.
Along with knowing I'm not alone.

Lurking around a corner,
On a cold winter's night,
Rights my wrongs,
If I can make you mine.
Dumbfounded to have to prone.

Lust propels me,
Onto your heart,
Right before I head,
Into your soul.
Drastically making myself known.

Losing only,
One thing,
Realizing how much,
I miss you.
Hoping that it's grown.

Lapping her conscience,
Only to make me desperate to her touch,
Reminiscing about the good times we've had
I fall.
Only to realize that we've gone home.

-Thank you, Lori!

Copyright © nvn_jacobs ... [ 2007-03-09 10:58:57]
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Re: Desperate to Her Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 12:42:54 PM AEST
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I found this quite sweet ..

Good luck to you both

Dee xx

Re: Desperate to Her Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 10:18:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful. This was sweet and heartfelt. Great poem. Wish you both the very best.

Take care
Christina

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