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Array ( [sid] => 132468 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Fake Dream [time] => 2007-03-07 09:02:43 [hometext] => My last thought [bodytext] => The love that feel like a dream.
The dreams feel so real.
Dreams of you, and me
And what we could become

But you never had those dreams,
Did you?
Your never felt that way,
Towards me.

You led me along,
You led me to believe,
That you could care for something
Other than yourself

Having to gain your attention,
As if its some sort of trophy.
As if your some sort of prize
That I have to fight to win

Laying on the bathroom floor,
Tears running down my cheeks
A blade in my hand
Trying to end the fight

Will you slit my wrists for me?
I don’t have the courage.
I don’t have the strength.
To take this life.

A gun in my hand,
As I open my mouth
Looking down the barrel
Seeing if there is any hope

Reading that message over again
The last thing you will ever say to me
Let that stay in your mind.
Maybe you could have seen what we had.

What I gave to you
Was special to me
But you never saw that
You didn’t care

Its amazing what you can do
When you have a gun to your head.
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A Fake Dream

Contributed by Angel-1 on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 09:02:43 AM in AEST
Topic: obsession



The love that feel like a dream.
The dreams feel so real.
Dreams of you, and me
And what we could become

But you never had those dreams,
Did you?
Your never felt that way,
Towards me.

You led me along,
You led me to believe,
That you could care for something
Other than yourself

Having to gain your attention,
As if its some sort of trophy.
As if your some sort of prize
That I have to fight to win

Laying on the bathroom floor,
Tears running down my cheeks
A blade in my hand
Trying to end the fight

Will you slit my wrists for me?
I don’t have the courage.
I don’t have the strength.
To take this life.

A gun in my hand,
As I open my mouth
Looking down the barrel
Seeing if there is any hope

Reading that message over again
The last thing you will ever say to me
Let that stay in your mind.
Maybe you could have seen what we had.

What I gave to you
Was special to me
But you never saw that
You didn’t care

Its amazing what you can do
When you have a gun to your head.




Copyright © Angel-1 ... [ 2007-03-07 09:02:43]
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Re: A Fake Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:06:56 PM AEST
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this is a very painful write.. it conveys a few messeges in it.. i dunno if your trying to say you want to end your life over someone or not but if so no one is worth ending your life over. you will find someone who will care.. this is a very powerful write.. good job

vampyress jenni


Re: A Fake Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Ari on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:13:04 PM AEST
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angel-1, this is an extremely powerful write

i pray that you find the power within yourself not to end your life and that you can find even more power to allow yourself to love another, one day we all find someone to love and be loved back by


Re: A Fake Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:25:30 PM AEST
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I hope this time has passed and you have moved on .... life is too short to waste on those not deserving ...

Your time will come your freedom will come to love and be loved again ....

good luck

Dee xx


Re: A Fake Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 10:44:47 PM AEST
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A million loves will come and go...and time will show you how love is like a tree...Flowering in sping...dormant in the winter...a cycle that goes on and on..your flowers will return and bloom again and love will shine....as an old soul I know this to be true.




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