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[aid] => mick
[title] => untitled
[time] => 2007-03-06 16:49:44
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => against the sky
two birds on wing
their path is tangled bliss.
reminds me
of abandoned days
the wind
and our last kiss.
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 405
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[informant] => elle
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => LoveRemembered
)
untitled
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 04:49:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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against the sky
two birds on wing
their path is tangled bliss.
reminds me
of abandoned days
the wind
and our last kiss.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2007-03-06 16:49:44]
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 06:19:16 PM AEST
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Short and very sweet! I really enjoyed this. It made me smile. I look forward to reading more of your work, so keep writing and keep sharing!
- Marisa |
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Re: untitled
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:39:20 PM AEST
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ahh
a wind of bliss |
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Re: untitled
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:27:18 AM AEST
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Perhaps Larks against the sky....
Terse & Beautiful
Peace
Yangdantien
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Re: untitled
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by Benny14 on
Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 02:44:07 AM AEST
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| best 7 lines ive seen on this site. an amazing amount of emotion wrapped in a passing thought. great work. |
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Re: untitled
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by AirHead on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 11:24:08 AM AEST
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| beautiful |
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Re: untitled
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by Spike on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 10:24:16 PM AEST
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elle, somewhere happily nesting bw lyrical and limerick poetry. Crisp and elaborate imagery for so few lines. Excellent first post.
Spike |
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 10:15:30 AM AEST
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| Wistful and pretty. |
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 03:57:34 PM AEST
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Enchanting and beautiful!
-Phil |
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