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[aid] => mick
[title] => Ice-Blood
[time] => 2007-03-06 15:40:04
[hometext] => I'm not sure about the middle stanza. I think it could do with changing but anyway...
[bodytext] => November is normal, By March we're worried. The grey smoke threatening rain overhead, More so threatening than her frostbite That should keep her much warmer But leaves her colder. No skin to be shown this year A little less aesthetics this year. The socks aren't thick enough To block the water. Magenta nail polish has spread further onto the toes So much that they're more of a crimson. March were worried By May we've panicked. Long lost summer Took her confidence Stole his fear Shattered their dreams And froze the blood in my veins. Im preparing for my cardiac arrest. But wait, its here To beat my face and burn my eyes. Maybe even melt my ice-blood, And the frost that covers the grass. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Chess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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