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Array ( [sid] => 132433 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cherrycoke's Latest [time] => 2007-03-06 11:04:02 [hometext] => moreso a song. needs a tune. rhythm doesn't remain constant, i'm fully aware of it, but again - it's meant for music [bodytext] => How did this happen
When did we change
Life was fantastic
But now it's all rearranged
Somehow I messed up
I'll fully admit
But I was distracted
And now can't make sense of it

-(Bridge to Chorus)-

I can't stand this helpless feeling
That I cannot make a difference
I have fell upon my knees before-
You pleading for forgiveness

But you turn away to hide your tears
When really it's your weakness
To face the One who sees your fears
And admit you need forgiveness

-(Chorus)-

I don't wear my broken heart on my sleeve
Simply to amuse you

Please forgive me
I forgave you
Christ forgave me
Just as He's forgiven you too

-(End Chorus)-


I've changed my ways
But you've turned away
I've buried my pride
But yours is still thriving
And I'm standing alone
With my arms left wide open

-(Repeat Chorus)-

Though I've felt numb
I still have feelings
And though it hurts
I'm still healing [comments] => 2 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 50 [informant] => cherrycoke [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
Cherrycoke's Latest

Contributed by cherrycoke on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 11:04:02 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



How did this happen
When did we change
Life was fantastic
But now it's all rearranged
Somehow I messed up
I'll fully admit
But I was distracted
And now can't make sense of it

-(Bridge to Chorus)-

I can't stand this helpless feeling
That I cannot make a difference
I have fell upon my knees before-
You pleading for forgiveness

But you turn away to hide your tears
When really it's your weakness
To face the One who sees your fears
And admit you need forgiveness

-(Chorus)-

I don't wear my broken heart on my sleeve
Simply to amuse you

Please forgive me
I forgave you
Christ forgave me
Just as He's forgiven you too

-(End Chorus)-


I've changed my ways
But you've turned away
I've buried my pride
But yours is still thriving
And I'm standing alone
With my arms left wide open

-(Repeat Chorus)-

Though I've felt numb
I still have feelings
And though it hurts
I'm still healing




Copyright © cherrycoke ... [ 2007-03-06 11:04:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Cherrycoke's Latest (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 12:25:50 PM AEST
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a very good reconsilation piece and a great wording in apologetic form.. very well written

vampyress Jenni


Re: Cherrycoke's Latest (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:48:32 PM AEST
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Well done




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