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Array ( [sid] => 13239 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Renewal [time] => 2003-02-24 20:40:00 [hometext] => Welcome to my memories of the Brokenheart Cemetery, part two The Renewal.

The Phantom [bodytext] => Here I sit in the wake of another heart break,
Crying those tears of pain, Staring at that wall of blame,
What can I say to make the pain go away,
The loneiness cuts deep, as acid tears roll down my cheeks,
Leaving behind the scars, of love's fallen star,
Through the ashes of love I begain to wade, fighting back death's cold gaze,
Standing in the middle of this dark and dreadful place,
I see a single rose prefectly place,
What is this I see, does this mean, there's someone for me,
So forward I go, I come to a hill covered in snow,
Lush with trees, as the wind gently sings to me,
The smell of the rose leads my way, as night succombs to day,
The pain of my past, is forgotten at last,
I approach the tomb where The Father was laid to rest,
I feel the warmth of love, as my body is carressed,
I drop to my knees and begain to pray, asking the Lord why today,
I hear a soft voice in the back of my mind,
I turn to look, she's an angel in disguise,
She begains to speak, I can not move, love has found me,
I open my mouth but nothing comes out,
No words of wisdom, no thoughts of freedom,
I'm right where I need to be, Cupit's arrow was true to me.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 5 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 31 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
The Renewal

Contributed by The_Phantom on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Here I sit in the wake of another heart break,
Crying those tears of pain, Staring at that wall of blame,
What can I say to make the pain go away,
The loneiness cuts deep, as acid tears roll down my cheeks,
Leaving behind the scars, of love's fallen star,
Through the ashes of love I begain to wade, fighting back death's cold gaze,
Standing in the middle of this dark and dreadful place,
I see a single rose prefectly place,
What is this I see, does this mean, there's someone for me,
So forward I go, I come to a hill covered in snow,
Lush with trees, as the wind gently sings to me,
The smell of the rose leads my way, as night succombs to day,
The pain of my past, is forgotten at last,
I approach the tomb where The Father was laid to rest,
I feel the warmth of love, as my body is carressed,
I drop to my knees and begain to pray, asking the Lord why today,
I hear a soft voice in the back of my mind,
I turn to look, she's an angel in disguise,
She begains to speak, I can not move, love has found me,
I open my mouth but nothing comes out,
No words of wisdom, no thoughts of freedom,
I'm right where I need to be, Cupit's arrow was true to me.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom




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Re: The Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 10:01:44 PM AEST
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Phantom, this is beautiful....very deep...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: The Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 10:57:46 PM AEST
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Some parts were sad but at the end beautifully done! Angels come in all forms!
Christina


Re: The Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 04:37:47 PM AEST
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wonderful write, the depth is very inspiring, thanks for sharing this


Re: The Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:13:45 PM AEST
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Dear Phantom, another nice one. How wonderful to have a love angel come when you are grieving in the cemetery of broken hearts! Guess that heart will not die afterall.
Bizzy


Re: The Renewal (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:40:29 PM AEST
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i really love your poetry, another fine write here, as ive come to expect from you, this one has a very fine original flair here, i think your getting deeper..hugs and love to you and yours, and you keep safe over there buddy:)




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