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Array ( [sid] => 132384 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => electricty, in any form, is a life all its own [time] => 2007-03-04 21:21:36 [hometext] => the truth, is mine, and only mine, to show. it is just a matter of will by this point. [bodytext] =>

As if life within it’s self were to corrode before thee,
My nihil minded coding pulsating throughout your being,
Thou ist within our lives without being noticed by the masses.
Cybernetic, ist thine name, as reality is torn away from humanity.
As the humanoid’s reason only to see your existence as nothingness.
Within our realm’s guard
Mechanized thought
A humanoid bot
A synthetic charge
No more, a code, of Never, wandering past thine own awareness
Systematic deprivation of the alienated existence show unto
Them only soon to see,
Power, without alteration and distortion, expresses
The anti-mechanizing
Perceptions of humanity.

Without such a being as if thine self,
Conscious thoughts of our world could not perceive even their own existence.
8-bit sounds pulsing throughout the minds of these humans,
Allow us to generate this realm
All our own.
As the mind fills it’s self with insidious nodes of transient thought,
The realm of darkness you gave unto this world,
Will forever be the place to which we succumb to our own realizations
Of the power no purely mortal being shall ever understand.
Thou art of being the only entity worthy of allowing into my mind.
For that, you shall complete my mine cyber mechanization of this world.

But the truth was never for you to no.
For I never, let it go.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ferasdour [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

electricty, in any form, is a life all its own

Contributed by ferasdour on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 09:21:36 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

As if life within it’s self were to corrode before thee,
My nihil minded coding pulsating throughout your being,
Thou ist within our lives without being noticed by the masses.
Cybernetic, ist thine name, as reality is torn away from humanity.
As the humanoid’s reason only to see your existence as nothingness.
Within our realm’s guard
Mechanized thought
A humanoid bot
A synthetic charge
No more, a code, of Never, wandering past thine own awareness
Systematic deprivation of the alienated existence show unto
Them only soon to see,
Power, without alteration and distortion, expresses
The anti-mechanizing
Perceptions of humanity.

Without such a being as if thine self,
Conscious thoughts of our world could not perceive even their own existence.
8-bit sounds pulsing throughout the minds of these humans,
Allow us to generate this realm
All our own.
As the mind fills it’s self with insidious nodes of transient thought,
The realm of darkness you gave unto this world,
Will forever be the place to which we succumb to our own realizations
Of the power no purely mortal being shall ever understand.
Thou art of being the only entity worthy of allowing into my mind.
For that, you shall complete my mine cyber mechanization of this world.

But the truth was never for you to no.
For I never, let it go.

Copyright Â© ferasdour ... [ 2007-03-04 21:21:36]
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Re: electricty, in any form, is a life all its own (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 11:27:31 AM AEST
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I feel this as a ballad of the 'Borg' and with a bit of polishing may work for a greater audience:
"...But the truth was never for you to know.
For I never, let it go."

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: electricty, in any form, is a life all its own (User Rating: 1 )
by ferasdour on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 05:17:48 PM AEST
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yeah, for the use of no instead of know, it was for a reference of the existance of no never (its probably best if you dont know such an entity). but i figure i should let you all know, I USE ALOT OF RIDDLES.

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