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Array ( [sid] => 132376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben [time] => 2007-03-04 17:14:41 [hometext] => Wonder not of what i see or feel when i look at you, just alway's know in these eye's your still that girl to me, and in my heart? well, what else could my love for you be but timeless. [bodytext] =>


Oh

you know it

don't you? it's there in

many way's, every time i look

at you i see our younger

days.


Those

hungry years

when love was new

our baby on the way,

a kiss good by and off

i went to work another

day.


You'd

weave your spell around me

like a seamtress weaving cloth,

into

your flame of passion i was

drawn just like a

moth.


A

sweet

and caring mother

such a beauty in your

prime,

who

only grew

more beautiful

amidst the passing

time.


Yes

you know it

don't you? like

every women does,

remembering our yesterday's

with everything that

was.


Yet

worry not my lovely

for even at this

age,

your

still that

premadonna,

upon my heart's

stage.


My

partner

in a thing called love

that made us who we are,

who's gleam of love within her

eyes would shame the

brightest

star.


And

always

i will show you

still how much you

mean to

me,

for

were

my heart

a mirror your

reflection you

would

see.


So

wonder not that

at this age how true

my love could be, just

read the words upon this

page,


YOUR

STILL THAT

GIRL TO

ME.


XO


Ben
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 2 [informant] => myheartsvoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 05:14:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry






Oh

you know it

don't you? it's there in

many way's, every time i look

at you i see our younger

days.


Those

hungry years

when love was new

our baby on the way,

a kiss good by and off

i went to work another

day.


You'd

weave your spell around me

like a seamtress weaving cloth,

into

your flame of passion i was

drawn just like a

moth.


A

sweet

and caring mother

such a beauty in your

prime,

who

only grew

more beautiful

amidst the passing

time.


Yes

you know it

don't you? like

every women does,

remembering our yesterday's

with everything that

was.


Yet

worry not my lovely

for even at this

age,

your

still that

premadonna,

upon my heart's

stage.


My

partner

in a thing called love

that made us who we are,

who's gleam of love within her

eyes would shame the

brightest

star.


And

always

i will show you

still how much you

mean to

me,

for

were

my heart

a mirror your

reflection you

would

see.


So

wonder not that

at this age how true

my love could be, just

read the words upon this

page,


YOUR

STILL THAT

GIRL TO

ME.


XO


Ben




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Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 11:28:31 PM AEST
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"You'd
weave your spell around me
like a seamtress weaving cloth,
into
your flame of passion i was
drawn just like a
moth."

In much the same manner as these words drew me into the rest of your write...
Greatjob!!!

BigLove
~me


Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 10:04:21 AM AEST
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wow I love the expression in this.. its so well worded.. its like an aging love that unfolds deeper.. beautiful devotion and another wonderful write by you..

vampyress jenni


Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by SeXyDrAgOn on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 11:57:14 AM AEST
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wow, I wish I were half the poet you are


Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 02:19:42 PM AEST
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As always your wife is a beautiful person
with a kind man to let her know.
It sudates me into a place i long been from.

I can't appraciate your words more.


Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 02:25:33 PM AEST
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wow, what a beautiful poem. so sweet and loving you are to write this. sounds like the two of you are so blessed to have each other. truly a delight to read.
~p




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