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Array ( [sid] => 132351 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fading Creature [time] => 2007-03-04 00:38:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Got a feeling
Something is changing
the scene's rearranging...
I am no longer fooled
I finally see the real you
and what you are
is a insecure
love making heartbreaking creature
and I
no longer need you.

Once you had the power
and I was captivated
you drugged me
and had me deeply sedated...
I could see liquid flow
from your lips
as you were talking,
but now my eyes are open
I can see is the horror
and all I wanna do is scream.

You are not smiling now
and soon you'll be like a ghost
slowly fading
a long lost memory
undulating
back into the shadows.

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Fading Creature

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 12:38:39 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Got a feeling
Something is changing
the scene's rearranging...
I am no longer fooled
I finally see the real you
and what you are
is a insecure
love making heartbreaking creature
and I
no longer need you.

Once you had the power
and I was captivated
you drugged me
and had me deeply sedated...
I could see liquid flow
from your lips
as you were talking,
but now my eyes are open
I can see is the horror
and all I wanna do is scream.

You are not smiling now
and soon you'll be like a ghost
slowly fading
a long lost memory
undulating
back into the shadows.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2007-03-04 00:38:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fading Creature (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 08:19:20 AM AEST
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Life is an on going Process of trial and error, when you know your have taken a wrong turn common senses is that we turn back to find the right path. I liked the verses when you say...
"Once you had the power
and I was captivated
you drugged me
and had me deeply sedated...
I could see liquid flow
from your lips
as you were talking,
but now my eyes are open
I can see is the horror
and all I wanna do is scream."

Great write.

FRANCO

Re: Fading Creature (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 01:13:41 AM AEST
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It sounds like a life lesson. Good choice of words to describe what you want the reader to feel.

Whisper

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