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[title] => Comfrontation
[time] => 2007-03-02 19:15:59
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[bodytext] => Boys, they just can''t wait can they? So unsure of what i might say, my boyfriend dared to ask me! in my point of view it is a fantasy most guys dream about all of their teen years. i figured he may have thought about it from time to time but i didn''t think he''d ever dare to ask me, at least not so soon. i love him with all my heart, i''ve told him that so many times. but this is different. of coarse i am embarrassed but i have to admit i want to so very much, if not more than he does... well i doubt that. i''ve tried to picture how it would all happen but the thought s of it all are so overwhelming... i''ve decided it''s time to finally confront him about everything and give him my answer i have been avoidng for so long. firmly so he''ll know exactly what i want! i walk in and everyone turns silently and looks at me as i stop for a moment. i see him standing there... he''s been expecting me and oh man can i tell how nervous he is. although he is hiding it so well, using that same cheesy smile he used when he had asked me out long ago. the silence is killing me and the only sound in this entire place is some corny song i couldn''t even name the title of. err, i just want to run up to him and scream everything that is on my mind to him. but that just wouldn''t be right. so i cautiously walk up to him, every step makes my legs ever more shaky. eventually i get to the point that i an standing face to face with him while this other guy talked aloud to everyone. it seemed to make lees attention on us for now. i slowly built up enough confidence to say what i wanted to say but then... he predictibly said the one thing everyone knew what any guy would say in his position, it was only a matter of time... well now it''s my turn to say what i have to say to him! .... "I do."
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Comfrontation
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baby_teddy_bu
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Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 07:15:59 PM in AEST
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Boys, they just can''t wait can they? So unsure of what i might say, my boyfriend dared to ask me! in my point of view it is a fantasy most guys dream about all of their teen years. i figured he may have thought about it from time to time but i didn''t think he''d ever dare to ask me, at least not so soon. i love him with all my heart, i''ve told him that so many times. but this is different. of coarse i am embarrassed but i have to admit i want to so very much, if not more than he does... well i doubt that. i''ve tried to picture how it would all happen but the thought s of it all are so overwhelming... i''ve decided it''s time to finally confront him about everything and give him my answer i have been avoidng for so long. firmly so he''ll know exactly what i want! i walk in and everyone turns silently and looks at me as i stop for a moment. i see him standing there... he''s been expecting me and oh man can i tell how nervous he is. although he is hiding it so well, using that same cheesy smile he used when he had asked me out long ago. the silence is killing me and the only sound in this entire place is some corny song i couldn''t even name the title of. err, i just want to run up to him and scream everything that is on my mind to him. but that just wouldn''t be right. so i cautiously walk up to him, every step makes my legs ever more shaky. eventually i get to the point that i an standing face to face with him while this other guy talked aloud to everyone. it seemed to make lees attention on us for now. i slowly built up enough confidence to say what i wanted to say but then... he predictibly said the one thing everyone knew what any guy would say in his position, it was only a matter of time... well now it''s my turn to say what i have to say to him! .... "I do."
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Re: Comfrontation
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 08:49:56 PM AEST
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UNUSUAL WRITE! COOL THOUGH,IF IT'S LOVE,I WISH YOU THE VERY BEST-BOTH OF YOU!! HAVE A HAPPY LIFE,& LOVE TOGETHER-AMEN!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Comfrontation
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 09:28:55 PM AEST
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This is really good..keep writing.This is soo cute!
-Christina |
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Re: Comfrontation
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 08:10:39 AM AEST
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| A very precious share of a special time in your life and written with a teasing twist....I enjoyed this. Thank you |
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