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Array ( [sid] => 132281 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE STORY [time] => 2007-03-01 20:40:02 [hometext] => I WAS REALLYYYYYYYY IN A VERY BAD MODE WRITING THIS POEM [bodytext] => when you try to explain
how u r going insane
what u r feeling inside
all the sorrow and pain.....

when u try to express
how ur life is such a mess
and ur tears starts to fall
and u need a caress....

now u r blinded with tears
u remember all the years
that passed u by so slowly
full of worries and fears....

u don`t want to go on
against the world u r just one
u kept fighting everyday
now ur stength is all gone....

u don`t care if u die
u r already dead inside
yes,life is full of happiness
but ur tears made u blind.....

i`m not showing u glory
i`m not just telling a story
about a girl full of sadness
hopelessness,fear and worry....

she used to fight life right back
life was all white no black
when she was locked in a dark room
she found light through a crack....

life started pushing her around
forcing her hard to the ground
although she struggled
it pulled her down till she drawned...

miracles happen u`ll discover
but i doubt she`ll ever recover
if a miracle came her way
she won`t even bother

and so i sit alone and pray
that she`ll stand up again one day
dry her eyes from their tears
and go on.....on her way
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Aims [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
THE STORY

Contributed by Aims on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 08:40:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



when you try to explain
how u r going insane
what u r feeling inside
all the sorrow and pain.....

when u try to express
how ur life is such a mess
and ur tears starts to fall
and u need a caress....

now u r blinded with tears
u remember all the years
that passed u by so slowly
full of worries and fears....

u don`t want to go on
against the world u r just one
u kept fighting everyday
now ur stength is all gone....

u don`t care if u die
u r already dead inside
yes,life is full of happiness
but ur tears made u blind.....

i`m not showing u glory
i`m not just telling a story
about a girl full of sadness
hopelessness,fear and worry....

she used to fight life right back
life was all white no black
when she was locked in a dark room
she found light through a crack....

life started pushing her around
forcing her hard to the ground
although she struggled
it pulled her down till she drawned...

miracles happen u`ll discover
but i doubt she`ll ever recover
if a miracle came her way
she won`t even bother

and so i sit alone and pray
that she`ll stand up again one day
dry her eyes from their tears
and go on.....on her way




Copyright © Aims ... [ 2007-03-01 20:40:02]
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Re: THE STORY (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 09:17:18 PM AEST
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emotions flying in this..but very good


Re: THE STORY (User Rating: 1 )
by onlyoneheart on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 02:32:33 PM AEST
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niceeeeee....really




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