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By: Jen

The tears never ending
My heart always bleeding
Reaching out but touching nothing
My fingertips grasp only air
So close but yet too far
Am I willing to risk so much for you?
I think I am even if I lose my best friend
I hold your gaze
You eyes like a maze
Full of emotions and confusion
Mine full of invisible tears noticeable to only you
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Your eyes like a maze

Contributed by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 08:20:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Your Eyes Like a Maze
By: Jen

The tears never ending
My heart always bleeding
Reaching out but touching nothing
My fingertips grasp only air
So close but yet too far
Am I willing to risk so much for you?
I think I am even if I lose my best friend
I hold your gaze
You eyes like a maze
Full of emotions and confusion
Mine full of invisible tears noticeable to only you

Copyright © Jen_unknown_to_myself ... [ 2007-03-01 20:20:46]
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Re: Your eyes like a maze (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 07:41:06 PM AEST
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Good poem. Sounds like you have a lot on your plate. In regards to your author's note, I just wanted to tell you woman to woman, don't ever let yourself feel that you're not good enough for someone. : )

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