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Array ( [sid] => 132276 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreams Of Love [time] => 2007-03-01 17:16:06 [hometext] => To of loved and lost. Some say it to be better. I dont know. What do you think [bodytext] => Standing in the rain,
In the field of dreams.
Do you not know me?
You can, but won’t see

What stands in front of you?
I block your view
Yet you never noticed me
And I cared for you?!

You left the field
When you were unable to see
You grew to fear me
To fear the field of dreams

I begged you not to
But you drifted away
You forgot all about me
Your one and only

In our field I tried
I tried so many times
I tried so hard
So hard in rhymes

I spoke your name
You never heard me
I look into your eyes
You look through me

I reach for you
You leave in distraction
I’m holding your hand
You don’t even feel me

You cry and I wonder
Now I know why
I left you first
You loved me last
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Dreams Of Love

Contributed by crazyDawn on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 05:16:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Standing in the rain,
In the field of dreams.
Do you not know me?
You can, but won’t see

What stands in front of you?
I block your view
Yet you never noticed me
And I cared for you?!

You left the field
When you were unable to see
You grew to fear me
To fear the field of dreams

I begged you not to
But you drifted away
You forgot all about me
Your one and only

In our field I tried
I tried so many times
I tried so hard
So hard in rhymes

I spoke your name
You never heard me
I look into your eyes
You look through me

I reach for you
You leave in distraction
I’m holding your hand
You don’t even feel me

You cry and I wonder
Now I know why
I left you first
You loved me last

Copyright Â© crazyDawn ... [ 2007-03-01 17:16:06]
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Re: Dreams Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 05:46:24 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I know the feeling all too well....I too don't know if it's better to have loved and lost because sometimes the pain is almost unbarable. I'm still standing alone in my own field of dreams. You beautifully expressed your emotions in this piece. Excellent job.

Re: Dreams Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Lenore_Poe15 on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 06:06:13 PM AEST
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beautiful write, the feeling all to familiar... be strong though you'll find a way
-Kitsune

Re: Dreams Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 07:12:53 PM AEST
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A complex many lovers faced but alas I think you know better now the expressions and feeling had you stay and then walk away in hopes you will be loved again and the next time as much as you have loved.

Good Job

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: Dreams Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 08:57:53 PM AEST
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I would rather to have never loved at all because I know the feeling to have loved and lost. It hurts so much and so many tears are cried. But then again once you are over that one person you start longing for love and compassion again. I wish you could just love and be loved and never lose.

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