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Array ( [sid] => 132271 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2007-03-01 15:14:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I carefully piece together my words to form perfect sentences. As I slowly but surely think of what I should say. My thoughts flow through my head like the vibrant Nile, and it's never ending.

But as soon as my mouth forms to speak these words nothing comes out. I search for ways to express the words that I thought through so many times. But something keeps me from speaking.

I wonder why this always seems to happen to me; but it's hard for me to understand. The words I want to speak are only to explain my feelings but again my mouth forms and I CHOKE...

What the hell is wrong with me? Why can't I say how I feel While I feel It...
I NEED TO FIND MY VOICE!!!!! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 43 [informant] => EmeraldSky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Untitled

Contributed by EmeraldSky on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 03:14:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I carefully piece together my words to form perfect sentences. As I slowly but surely think of what I should say. My thoughts flow through my head like the vibrant Nile, and it's never ending.

But as soon as my mouth forms to speak these words nothing comes out. I search for ways to express the words that I thought through so many times. But something keeps me from speaking.

I wonder why this always seems to happen to me; but it's hard for me to understand. The words I want to speak are only to explain my feelings but again my mouth forms and I CHOKE...

What the hell is wrong with me? Why can't I say how I feel While I feel It...
I NEED TO FIND MY VOICE!!!!!

Copyright © EmeraldSky ... [ 2007-03-01 15:14:16]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by crazyDawn on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 05:25:09 PM AEST
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I really like this poem alot I guess because it reminds me of myself and how i use to be. if this is true dont worrie your voice will come, and maybe it just through you writings thats how it is for me for now hopefuly

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 07:37:47 PM AEST
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I like this it captures the struggle of the mind/body for expression. Thoughts = Language so feelings must become thoughts to find the voice and there's the rub and turmoil within translating, transforming feelings to words.
One sure thing to keep trying, moving in and out of knowing and not knowing what you are really feeling, is a drain. The mechanism of confidence to state this is what I am feeling NO DOUBT, is as important as learning how to read is, in order to think.

Well Done & Provocative

Peace
Yangdantien

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