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maybe too much time on your hands to think.
Take this here, it's one on the house.
Sit back, relax, what's this all about?

Aw, son, that's awful, she up ya and gone.
Women can be decieving, gone with the dawn.
Had a lady myself once, pretty as pie.
But she was gone, with the blink of my eye.

Hell, you don't need a woman, trouble they give.
You got alot to learn son, more life to live.
Warming ya up, ain't it? Best drink we serve.
Mix it with coke, you're up for the curve.

You got three kids? And how old you be?
Damn kid, you're young, merely 23.
It's too bad son, that she took them away.
There is hope for tomorrow, so drink away.

Here have another, you really gone sad.
Nothing can ever be this bad.
She'll be back, before you ever really know.
Just take away the pain, with this Amaretto.
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Amaretto

Contributed by Jazz on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Son, you look like you need a drink,
maybe too much time on your hands to think.
Take this here, it's one on the house.
Sit back, relax, what's this all about?

Aw, son, that's awful, she up ya and gone.
Women can be decieving, gone with the dawn.
Had a lady myself once, pretty as pie.
But she was gone, with the blink of my eye.

Hell, you don't need a woman, trouble they give.
You got alot to learn son, more life to live.
Warming ya up, ain't it? Best drink we serve.
Mix it with coke, you're up for the curve.

You got three kids? And how old you be?
Damn kid, you're young, merely 23.
It's too bad son, that she took them away.
There is hope for tomorrow, so drink away.

Here have another, you really gone sad.
Nothing can ever be this bad.
She'll be back, before you ever really know.
Just take away the pain, with this Amaretto.

Copyright © Jazz ... [ 2003-02-24 16:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Amaretto (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:04:17 PM AEST
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LMAO!! Hey, Jazz... This really made me smile...I enjoyed it tremendously... Thanks for sharig it...
Jenni

Re: Amaretto (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:27:33 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this ... well written.

Re: Amaretto (User Rating: 1 )
by PrincessPage on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 06:49:05 PM AEST
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Hi Jazz, your poem made a little grin come across my face to, i like it because i though it was quite original to!

Re: Amaretto (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 09:14:56 PM AEST
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right on, you know that after god created eve, adam asked for a painkiller and he created liquor. just kidding, but i did enjoy the read.

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